sorry if my comment made you feel like you are not a good writer. That was not my intention. But when u post a story in a platform like sajha, you should have thought about its users and presumed that we have an ability to grasp the inferred idea(except few exceptionally intellegent people :) ). When you gave us that extra detail after "NOTHING", you made us reader feel like a dumbass. i felt like you gave that detail because you thouhght i had no idea what was going on in her mind, why did she hugged him so tight before getting off of the motorbike and why was she crying. you had a perfect hollywood romantic drama going on until "NOTHING" but it came out as a silly bollywood flick at the end.