Posted by: behoove_me March 30, 2012
THE DEPARTURE
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Appreciate that everyone!
Once again, I am indebted to you guys for taking time to read through this fiction of mine. But like I had mentioned during my previous post, I wish I could’ve had that ability to write something nicer, something better or an awe inspiring read that sharply deviates from the routine stories I have been posting so far. As I write more, I realize I have limitations and very little room to improvise, maybe I am not as educated enough to write a better story.
Also, one of the big flaws in my writing is, I write as my mood strikes and post in haste. I do not edit and I do not think about restructuring the sentences. It could be a quick, good read, but not great by any means. Like 28 amendments pointed it out, I could have ended the story just at the point he mentioned, but I went ahead and dramatized it a little more. My bad. ‘That’ is the flaw I am speaking of; I guess I always need a fresh pair of eyes to read through my stories before I post it quickly.
Hopefully, someday I shall learn to write a little better and not worry about the flaws anymore.
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