The concept seems good!!! The movie could have been completed in 5-7 minutes. I felt it was made unnecessarily long. Why not be a little realistic in the movie. You are portraying a character that has no money to pay the rent for two months. He must be quite broke. Why not  a simple phone??? a simple laptop???a simple room probably with no couch. Why not a finished bottle of some cheap drink instead of black level? I don’t think it is easy for a Nepali student with no rent to afford a suv in New York . Simple things do make a great difference. Don’t get me wrong I know it is easy to criticize and hard to do a work but criticism is the way to improvement.  I watched your last video. You are progressing. I know you have the spirit and one day you will be a great movie maker!!!!!good luck....