Thanks khoikkhoi for your comment.For me all the comments are constructive. so you need not worry about it. Rather, I am delighted to read your criticism and to know the loop holes in my story from your perspective.
Yes, you are very true that the ending does seem to be in a little bit haste but I have tried to present the story in more realistic way than fictitious. So, this may have led to an unexpected ending or not a happy ending overall.
But, anyways its for sure that your words will definitely have an effect on me and I assure that you can observe the changes in my coming stories.
Thank you again and I expect to hear from you in the coming days too.

eclectic.