The way story is written is good but the fact or the core of the message didn't touch my feelings. Story flows well but I could not feel the love, sentiment on the characters. I am not a good writer but I am good reader, I think. I love literature; stories, poems but if it does not touch the inner heart or the feeling of the person then it might not touch the zenith a person has imaging.

Good luck on your future reading. Please take it positively. Everyone is giving positive response so I think it might have touched their heart.