Thank you guys for the feedbacks.

Oblivious- I am glad you liked it.
Khushi- Yeah it is my first post ever, I am glad you liked it.
arib007- I am sorry that you didn't like it, but I still thank you for you went through all of it :D.
guchcha_chor- It still falls under the "Short Story" category of literature. And I am glad you liked it.
Narayanghar_suburb- I hope you knew that I was changing settings...
Grace_S- I am glad you liked my details, and yeah thats what I was doing :D
ANS- Its a "Short Story" I didn't mean it literally. :)
Nitisha- I hope he will find his true love too :P
Rukdhell- I want the viewers to read the whole story ;)
Techguy- writing story is way harder than i though, it doesn't have any framework alerady :D
sikuti- Does it always have end in teardrops though :(.

Again I am sorry if I misleaded some of you by saying its a short story. I didn't mean that it is literally short, I just categorized it. :). Thanks again for the great feedbacks.