लेखिका महोदया,
साझामा दोस्रो पटक यो नेपाली युनिकोड प्रयोग गर्दैछु, गल्ती हरु हुनेछन, कृपया नादन कुकुर भनेर क्ष्यमा दिनुहोला :P

लेखिकालाई इम्पुल्सिवे भनेको त म पाठक नै इम्पुल्सिवे भा जस्तो लाग्यो हा हा हा पुरा कुरा नबुझेको रहेछ मैले :प्।।।सुरुमा १२ लाइन स्किम गरेको थिए:प्।।र त्यो ईम्पोर्टअन्त पार्त छुतेछ hahaha

hya...took me forever to type those few lines ..:P

bhanepachhi, kura ali clear chahin bhayo tara still...maarnai parne jaroori malai lagena :P..emandari purbak bhanda....huna ta you are the writer so you have the right to kill and give birth as you wish (hami ta je dekhayo tehi herne ta ho ni hahaha:P)..tara aba yo ta keti le jhagada parda ketalai .."dherai nagaali gara hai mardinchu ani thaha paucha" bhanya jasto..hahaha...kasto serious bha LOL:P

anywyas, i enjoyed the story (else i would not be commenting in the first place :P)..and keep up the good work. :D

and i can read nepali very well..high school ko final ma 53/100 lyayeko nepali ma ke bhanthanya? :P

and miss_me
Have i told you lately that i love you? :P (brotherly lop ni pheri :D)..hope alls well :D