Oh boy! typos typos and more typos...bad sentence construction, long intricate sentences and paras..they're everywhere. I might have hurried posting this piece without much editing, I am really sorry about that. I realize that editing is a crucial part in story writing. But i am just a starter--a crude novice so to speak and i am learning.

Mav,
Hope you managed to read it. I wrote it while i was on a bed-rest. That perhaps explains the length :P. And no, I ain't anyone in the story. It's a complete fiction. That's why the disclaimer :D

Sndi,
LOL! no i don't know how to swim :P haha....glad to know that you liked the piece (i hope you are being honest though :P)...and yah you should not miss the night-out, definitely not :D

Oldmaven,
It's a long piece indeed but I don't want to defend its length :P.....I just kept writing whatever stroke in my mind which I thought I should jot down...hope it came out good enough, if you managed to read it. :P

Parbatya,
I am not sure whether you liked the piece. If you haven't read it yet, happy reading. If you didn't like it, never mind :D

Hyde,
HAHAHA..no there is no such vivid description IMO. The love-making scenes are merely to juxtapose and  delineate the differences between different characters in the story. I didn't write them merely to brew paltry entertainment :D

mati,
mucho gracias! much appreciated. you found it monotonous? and i thought i had made it not so by giving striking differences to the shades of the characters. if you still found it so, then i failed ;P..

dhimaar,
thanks man! appreciate your feedback. not sure if anyone will be ready to produce the movie LOL...only if i manage to produce, direct and act all together by myself. but then, who's gonna watch it ? HAHAHA

danny bro!
thanks for stopping by. enjoy the read (if you are going to read it that is :P)

Alson,
no problem bro. have a kit-kat :D



(thanks to all the silent readers)