Posted by: chicagoan June 19, 2021
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No apologies necessary Crazy ji. As someone said, we are students for life and there are always new things to learn.
Yes, stronger foreshadowing would have helped to connect the ending. Ignoring Dr Robert’s appointment request was kind of a foreshadowing I guess.
The conversations between narrator, Lisa and humble in one instance and narrator, juna and humble in another was a clear indication to me that humble and narrator were falling in love in a normal chronological fashion. Yet, when both Lisa and Juna mentioned those conversations happened many years in the past, came from nowhere and threw me off.
Other than that, the mastery of language, the punchlines, the suspense build up are all superb.
Looking forward to your “brainchilds” in the future.
Yes, stronger foreshadowing would have helped to connect the ending. Ignoring Dr Robert’s appointment request was kind of a foreshadowing I guess.
The conversations between narrator, Lisa and humble in one instance and narrator, juna and humble in another was a clear indication to me that humble and narrator were falling in love in a normal chronological fashion. Yet, when both Lisa and Juna mentioned those conversations happened many years in the past, came from nowhere and threw me off.
Other than that, the mastery of language, the punchlines, the suspense build up are all superb.
Looking forward to your “brainchilds” in the future.