E-LOVE IN SAJHA: SOMEDAY I SHALL BUY YOU A PIZZA - PART 1

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behoove_me · Jan 4, 2012 8:54 AM · 22,353 views

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As I am typing this message I hope that girl whom you fell in love with so deep; so deep that even cheating on your baby momma made sense  to u was not babbal khate !

one that got away · Jan 4, 2012 10:31 AM

Good guess! But sadly, he did not exist back then. Did you? :)

behoove_me · Jan 4, 2012 10:34 AM

No Uranus !

one that got away · Jan 4, 2012 10:38 AM

 Are there a lot of married men on sajha? DAMN YOU! If it weren't for you guys, us singles would have be having fun w the ladies ;) Just sayin...

Cacophonix · Jan 4, 2012 10:40 AM

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behoove_me · Jan 4, 2012 10:48 AM

I truely enjoyed your writing. But your concluding paragraph is bad, Actually I should be allowed to love ten women simultaneously; are u comfortable with your wife being in love with ten men simultaneously?

jhapaliketo · Jan 4, 2012 10:48 AM

"In a world full of hatred and enmity, shouldn’t love be considered noble?"

rethink · Jan 4, 2012 10:49 AM

Jhapali this story is about him not his wife! lol

rethink · Jan 4, 2012 10:51 AM

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behoove_me · Jan 4, 2012 11:14 AM

Liked the story.....yetimai conclude nagaram na mitra....ajha padhna paye khusi lagthyo

Dukhe · Jan 4, 2012 11:39 AM

Dukhejyu, Thank you! I haven't concluded this story just as yet!

behoove_me · Jan 4, 2012 1:08 PM

 Nice read mate. I really liked the structuring, flow and choice of words. The content too sounds quite absorbing. waiting for the remaining parts.

lamopuri · Jan 4, 2012 8:52 PM

Not trying to be off topic but I just ate a pizza ! :D

druggist · Jan 4, 2012 9:31 PM

@behoove_me : again great writing.Choice of words are superb,organised ....Please keep writing.

edipre · Jan 4, 2012 11:44 PM

Awesome Read. Looking forward to the continuity of the story. :)

_Nas · Jan 5, 2012 12:22 AM

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behoove_me · Jan 5, 2012 8:50 AM

well written.. Now - I wonder what Sajha user/writer you were back then!   Look forward to reading more.. ~@~

saajha · Jan 5, 2012 12:45 PM

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behoove_me · Jan 5, 2012 3:44 PM

Unregistered users aren't expected to receive pizza requests on thier sajha inboxes.. If that part of the story was a fiction, then sighhh... I'd have to admit, I lose half of my zeal. I'll still continue reading the rest.. ~@~

Saajha · Jan 5, 2012 4:16 PM

I need to know how to view this post?? Ah!!!! Am the only one who is new to this website?? I just can't figure out how to view the original post. Some help, please.

conexioninlife · Apr 19, 2012 2:53 PM

....life s

28th amendment · Apr 19, 2012 5:37 PM

......life सोल्टी, यो कथामा खासै त्यस्तो केई छैन। स्टोरी चै के हो भने हाम्रो कथाको मूख्य पात्र घरमा धर्मपत्नी र नाबालक बच्चा हूनूको बाबजूत लास्ट खरीएर एक अनलाईन च्याटको साहारा लीन पूग्छन ।  र त्याहा उनको जम्काभेट म जस्तै काम नभको बकम्फूसेसँग हून् पूग्छ। ट्राजीडीको कूरो चै के भने बकम्फूसेले आफ्नो सूडनेम स्त्रीलीङ्ग राखेको हून्छ ।त्यसै कारणले हाम्रो प्रमूख पात्र बकम्फूसे तीर आकर्सीत हून पूग्छन ।अनी हाम्रो प्रमूख पात्र भने दीनानूदीन झनै खरीदै जान्छन । अब त अती भो भनेर हाम्रो प्रमूख पात्रले बक्मफूसेलाई  एक पल्ट जसरी नी भेटने भनेर ढीपी कस्छन अनी बकम्फूसेले अब त अती भो भनेर "आइ स्याल बाइ यू अ पीज्जा" भन्दै लोप्पा खूवाएर छाडी गएपछी यो कथा टूङ्गीन्छ।  हाउएभर आई वूड ह्याभ लभ्ड टू सी दोज फ्याग्टस गोईङ अन अ रीयल पीज्जा डेट !

28th amendment · Apr 19, 2012 6:19 PM

ha ha ha ha ha.. hasayo 28 bro ko story ley..

bittertruth · Apr 19, 2012 8:18 PM

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