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 (सकिन) बनेर आँसु रुन सकिन
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(सकिन) बनेर आँसु रुन सकिन

बनेर आँसु रुन सकिन
दिएर मुटु जिउन सकिन

जिन्दगी तिमीलाई मारी सके
आत्मा तिमीलाई मार्न सकिन

पुजेर देउता कामना भेट्को
सपना भेट्को मार्न सकिन

Simple* प्रयाश नजिकिने मेरो
दुरी तिम्रो घटाउन सकिन


*असफल

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प्रयाश गजल लेख्ने आश
मिठा तिता लेख्नु होला
गंत्येब्य सम्म पुर्याउनु होला |

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सिम्पल_केटा
काठमांडू
नेपाल


 
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मा गजल बिशेषअग्य त होइन तर भाब पूर्ण छ

डुबोस संसार बरु अमृत को प्याला मा
देउ मलाई बिश को प्याला एक
एक घुट्को पीइ  भन्ने छु, बिश नै मिठो बरु

 
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the first one looks like inspired from sabin cine's Maya

 
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तिम्रा अगाडिमा ‘प्रेमी’ ! तरुनी नाच्दछन् संधै

मेरो अगाडिमा आमा, दिदी,बैनी र जिन्दगी ।



तिमी हेर्छौ संधै ओठ आँख छाती अधिर भई

म हेर्छु ममता, माया त्यागकी विश्व सुन्दरी ।



तिमी छातीहरु ताक्छौ वैंशका सुमसुम्याउन

म हिमालहरु ताक्छु संजिवनी पियाउन ।



तिमी कपालमा हेर्छौ रेशमी केशहरु छुन

म चाँही बादलमा हेर्छु रसधारा बहाउन ।



तिम्रा आँखाहरु खोज्छन अध्याँरा ठाउँमा छुन

मेरा आँखाहरु खोज्छन उज्याला दृश्य पाउन ।



तिम्रो प्रेम अँध्यारोमा उर्लन्छ खहरे हुँदै

मेरो प्रेम उज्यालोमा फैलन्छ गण्डकी छुँदै ।
 
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...
UnknownAnZel thanks.



 
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timi_mero_sathi

"डुबोस संसार बरु अमृत को प्याला मा
देउ मलाई बिश को प्याला एक
एक घुट्को पीइ  भन्ने छु, बिश नै मिठो बरु"

मैले रक्सि चुरोट पिउने गरेको छुइन |
मैले सिद्धै अर्थ रक्सि र तल तल बारे लगाए... अरु अर्थ बुज्न सकिन |

दर्शन, दल-दल, गहिरो...
अर्थ तपाई को बुझ्न अलि सकिन, बुझाउनु हुन्छ कि?

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Last edited: 05-Apr-10 04:18 PM

 
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...
aamnepali




मैले जानेको गजल को फोर्मुला मा छैन यो, साएद कविता होला,

छाती को पिडा अनि नारी को आवाज
प्रकृति नै हो यो  नारी को आवाज |

जोगी भएर अलक जप्न सकिन
बैरो छुइन नसुन्न नारी को आवाज |

धन्येबाद

 
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...

teroobaau
Thanks for the valuable note.

you wrote, "first one looks like inspired from sabin cine's Maya"

Sorry, but who is Sabin Cine. I googled, searched few, but still can't find head or tail. Not a single clue at all.

I'm little more paranoid towards copyright things. I just don't want to humiliate others.

Well... it is coincidence, if we the Sabin Cine, and me; both had same words and feelings.

Please, a request. Since, I am unable to get Sabin Cine's "MAYA". Will you please, provide more information. Or if possible the full origional written text.

My honest thanks for pointing out the similarities (inspiration).

Have a wonderful time.

Bye.
Kathmandu, Nepal.
:smiles:
Last edited: 07-Apr-10 02:10 AM

 


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