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  बा म तिम्रो छोरो प्रकास , सगरमाथा को फेदी बाट

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Posted on 04-05-12 1:11 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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बा २ करोड को लोभ मा ,
बाबुराम अंकल ले दिन्छ भन्ने विश्वाश मा 
सगरमाथा चड्छु भनी खोकी हाले ,
पैसो त मिलेन मिलेन सगरमाथा चै चाडनै पर्ने भो , 
बा यो पाली कस्को को आँखा लाग्यो हाम्रो कमाइ मा 
मैले फोकट मा काम गर्न पर्ने भो । 
 
बा सगरमाथा चड्न गाह्रो रइछ , 
१३ हजार को लास मा चडेर  सत्ता  पुगे जस्तो सजिलो रइनछ , 
घोडा चडेर रोल्पा गये जस्तो हैन रइछ , 
पचासो काम्रेद काम म राखेर मस्ती गरे जस्तो हुन्न रइछ , 
बा सगरमाथा चड्न गाह्रो रइछ । 
 
बा सगरमाथा ले तिम्रो कुरो मान्दैन राइछ , 
मैले म प्रचन्न को छोरो हुँ भनेको 
सुनेको न सुनै गर्दो रइछ , 
मैले म सँग अझै धेरै सक्ती छ भनेर धम्क्याको 
अटेर गरेर बस्दो रइछ , 
हीउ पारेर मलाई सगरमाथा ले बा अगी बद्न नदिदो रइछ 
बा यहाँ तिम्रो पावर नचल्ने रइछ । 
 
बा एउटा बात चै यहाँ रमाइलो रइछ, 
जती जाड खाएनी हुने रइछ , 
जता लडे पनि हुने रइछ ,
न यहाँ पत्रकार छ , 
न क्यामरा , 
न कसैले देख्ला भन्ने डर छ न कसैको वास्ता नै छ , 
बा यहाँ जाड तन्न खान पाइदो रइछ । 
 
बा यहाँ त एक दम चिसो रइछ , 
मैले हिजो ग्रिनेड पड्काएर आगो बालेको थे , 
एक छिन त तातो भो , 
तर सगरमाथा को चिसो सामु हाम्रो केइ नलाग्ने रइछ , 
हाम्रो त्यस्तो महँगो बारुद पनि फिक्का भो ,
बा सगरमाथा तिमी भन्दा बल्वान रइछ । 
 
बा मलाई थाहा छ , 
तिम्लाई नि थाहा छ 
मैले सगरमाथा चडेर सम्भिधान बन्दैन , 
न त मैले सगरमाथा चडेर शान्ति नै आउछ , 
मैले त केबल जनता को आँखा मा छारो हाल्न खोजेको थे, 
प्रचन्न पुत्र ले केही गर्‍यो भन्ने पार्न खोजे थे , 
तर बा केही गर्‍यो भन्ने पार्न लाई केइ गर्न पर्ने रइछ , 
सित्तै मा हजारो काम्रेद को लाखौं खाए जस्तो सजिलो रइनछ 
बा सगरमाथा चडन गाह्रो रइछ, 
किनकी सगरमाथा ले रगत को भाषा नबुज्दो रइछ । 

Note :For sure I am not Prakas Dahal , Please comment about my poem, not about politics over here. Thank you

 
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मलाइ त दामी लाग्यो .

Superb !!!

 
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दामी - गज्जब

 
Posted on 04-05-12 1:29 PM     [Snapshot: 49]     Reply [Subscribe]
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My hats off....
 
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 Just superb. Hats off from my part too.
 
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Awesome.
Glad you added the disclaimer otherwise some of the sajhaites would be cursing at you.
 
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la babal cha bro.
Last edited: 05-Apr-12 02:01 PM

 
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निशब्द ~!!! कटु यथार्थ !!
 
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 sarai gajjab chha sathi! Keep it up.
Last edited: 06-Apr-12 04:02 PM

 
Posted on 04-05-12 3:52 PM     [Snapshot: 327]     Reply [Subscribe]
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 gajab cha hai amrikaane mitra...
 
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 मनपरो ...... तितो वास्तविकता  
 
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 बब्बाल छ ब्रो !!!
 
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 दामी लाग्यो ब्रो!!
 
Posted on 04-05-12 8:11 PM     [Snapshot: 651]     Reply [Subscribe]
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 ya ganthe...
amricane bhayara ni yasto ramro kabita nepali lekhne...
khoi sajha ko euta thread ma kasle top 10 nepali sahityakar khojdai thyo..I will choose one as you and I mean it...
 
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 ameri(Cane) mitra le ramro cane (lauro) diyo hai.
Good job!

 
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 bravo ! उत्कृष्ट !
 
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keep writing..
 



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