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 E-LOVE IN SAJHA: SOMEDAY I SHALL BUY YOU A PIZZA (FINAL PART)

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Posted on 01-09-12 12:32 PM     [Snapshot: 61]     Reply [Subscribe]
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Such a nice story. Loved it.

Now I am wondering who this Angelina is
 
Posted on 01-09-12 2:34 PM     [Snapshot: 269]     Reply [Subscribe]
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Amazing ending...IMO though fiction such events are not unusual...Great writing...For some reason, while reading the story by mind was boggled by this particular sentence “Timro thutuno dekhauna please”.  All the imagination I had of the girl of her beauty, courage, prettiness and all those stuffs came crashing down when I saw the word "thutuno". I don't know. To me the word sounded too rough...lol...I can understand the word being used by moms and not feel the roughness but love and care but wow "Thutuno" by a young girl, in a context, where she wants to see a guy for the first time on a webcam...Damn...I am not judging anyone but wanted to write something coz I was startled. For me it would have been a big turn-off...I would have hung for phone and call it a quit...lol....just saying....

 
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Posted on 01-09-12 3:23 PM     [Snapshot: 389]     Reply [Subscribe]
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Posted on 01-09-12 3:23 PM     [Snapshot: 379]     Reply [Subscribe]
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Wow! That's the only word popped in my mind after reading your "story". Very nice.
 
Posted on 01-09-12 4:03 PM     [Snapshot: 464]     Reply [Subscribe]
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Thank you spring! Words of encouragement from a quality member like you is a rare treat.

Sona_1, your smiles just made me nervous! :))
 
Posted on 01-09-12 4:49 PM     [Snapshot: 524]     Reply [Subscribe]
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Hahaha Beehove bro, tinn tinn wota thutuno dhekera nervous bhayou ki kya ho, tyo pani laaammmo "fhuli"stop sahit?...lol....

 
Posted on 01-09-12 5:06 PM     [Snapshot: 512]     Reply [Subscribe]
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behoove_me , thank you for one more nice read !! 



 
Posted on 01-09-12 5:10 PM     [Snapshot: 546]     Reply [Subscribe]
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 was really interesting....................
 
Posted on 01-09-12 5:17 PM     [Snapshot: 541]     Reply [Subscribe]
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"A man always wants to see his mother in his woman, except that he wants to sleep with the latter."

i am more than positive that behoove brother has pulled this story off magnificiantly overall but i couldnt go past this line. i just could not. i dont know whats wrong with it but it kind of grossed me out !

 
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Posted on 01-09-12 6:16 PM     [Snapshot: 570]     Reply [Subscribe]
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An eye catching read indeed.

I could not stop commenting on the use of word "circa".
In my field and as far as I know, the word is used either for the range of time or if specific year is  used , for the year that passed long ago, like "circa 1900", "Circa 1950" or even "circa 1980", It is my underrstanding that people dont use "circa" for recent time.

PS. I am neither  english major/minor nor a literature expert.Comment is based on use of the word in my field and my understanding only.


 
Posted on 01-09-12 6:57 PM     [Snapshot: 646]     Reply [Subscribe]
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 fabulous story but quite disappointing end. I would love to know what happened next!
 
Posted on 01-09-12 7:29 PM     [Snapshot: 637]     Reply [Subscribe]
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I am not sure if this is a story or a real life drama....

If it is a story then Bravo!!!  You indeed have a way of putting life into words...

However, if this is real, Shame on you!!!  Did I read it right?  Go over it again and make sure everyone knows he mentioned being married and loving some unidentified girl....

Don't get me wrong, just saying what i felt!

 
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Posted on 01-09-12 10:46 PM     [Snapshot: 794]     Reply [Subscribe]
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 Preety engaging story. Loved the ending part :) 

I was confused whether the wifey was Nepali or of other nationality because she didn't cook all the delicacies and only high carb food. Later i read she was in nepal with kids for the holidays. Well just a query.
 
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Posted on 01-11-12 7:09 AM     [Snapshot: 1102]     Reply [Subscribe]
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 Yes, behoobhe, you can still find me here! Pathetic, indeed, isn't it?
Not a pizza, but the promise to buy you a drink still stands -- though I may have to do cheers with a glass of water. Believe it!

Excellent read, as always! And dare I confess...the story sure does resonate with ......!

 
Posted on 01-11-12 9:10 AM     [Snapshot: 1146]     Reply [Subscribe]
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Behoove_me,

You are one of the gifted writers and there is no doubt on that. The thouroughness is something I admire most in your writings. Your writings are creative (eg. "Empire State of Teej"), unique (eg. "VISIT NEPAL: FIFTEEN YEARS LATER" ) and distinctive which can easily grab a reader's attention within literary terms.

Kudos to your work.....
 
Posted on 01-11-12 12:06 PM     [Snapshot: 1235]     Reply [Subscribe]
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OMG, How did you know my/our story? I rarely read english stories but after she (my "Miss Stranger") emailed me that our story is on Sajha, I am shocked and it totally drove me back to those days. Thank you Behoove_me.

Anyway great writing, enjoyed both parts.
 



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