although grounded in some truth about my life ,its basically part of fiction.
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last theory session i was attending in my college life.and it sure left me nostalgic.everyone was quite..don know wether i was quite or whole class was quite .but that excitement which i used to fantasise while dreaming of my last
day at college was lost somewhere.I just wanted was to sit there for a while and remember those moments in silence.
As i looked on desk i could see our name carved on it...stupid of us trying to make that name last for ever...
i rememmber ujwala sayin....hami 4 jana nai chora chori ko name same rakhne laa?(let's give same name to our children)
chori bhaye kusum .well seeing that name on desk i looked at them..they were quite,
pretending to be excited.
after a while paras handed me his auto.i took it with smile..."thank u."
he smiled and went to his desk. .it was like fashion during those days ..filling auto.i wondered why that auto was empty but
felt too bore to ask him...i just wrote the song "puranee jeans aur guitar"wrote my name and returned it .
everyone was busy ...everytime our teacher use to shout at us...hoina!!machabajar jasto katti halla garerakheko?!(why are u all
making noise...it seems like fish market)..but that day whole class was quite .teacher also noticed our melancholy in silence.
as bell rang ..we closed our bag .teacher informed us to come on sat for farewell..everyone started moving out of class.
ujwala said;jane hoina jam(let's go).
i said ; jadai gar la mero kam cha ma ekchin ma aunchu.(u guys go on..i'll go after a while)
.ujwala;ohki thn see ya tomorrow aunchas hoina ghar?(come home tomorrow )bye
i said bye ans stayed on empty class for a while.
thinking all those memories which lasted for whole two year.my bench from where i use to tease sarmila ,irritate bikash,
chirag's unique hand shake ,anjana ko sahid kanda...everything was their..my project work..all..my amusement,spirit,hardwork,tranquility,
vivaciousness...everything on same class which i passed for whole two year.
as i started moving out of my class..college was quite as abondoned area ..as i walked along the extensive hallways.i walked down the
down the cafeteria,looked at didi (cook) who was so sweet.
with smile i said "didi ramro sanga basnu laa"(have a good day.)
she smiled back.."has has nani aundai garnu la bhetnu"(keep on visting)
i smiled and moved out to courtyard.my sneakers felt heavy as i walked through the cafeteria..as i stood judt few
feet away from open door.i stood there for a moment ;it was only minute or so but it seemed like an eternity.
turned once ..looked closley towards my college which was standing and waving me good bye...
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Ohhhh..why do i feel i am a part of that story....he he he ....there is definately something common....and no one knows except me...he he he

check typo!
ardent!!hehe sristi khoi;)just kidding
anyway k ho common bhannu milcha ma pani sunu na;)

He he he he ...my typo is correct...i am 100% sure...but that common thing i can't share ...he he he ...sorry for that...but what can i say is similar to one scene which i have been too...exact duplicate !!! but where...he he he ...ohh why my memory is not working properly these days !!!!

.ohh why my memory is not working properly these days !!!!...................>>>>>
LOL
lop paree paachi taystai huncha bhanchan:P
sardi khasi na maleria huwaa..yeh gaya yaaroo iskoo loveria huwa loveria huwa ....:o)

sachiii nirman where are ya!!
can't see anything from your side these days...
are ya allright?????
article lekhda yaad ayo...
plzz post something from ur side in sajha:o)

sardi khasi na maleria huwaa..yeh gaya yaaroo iskoo loveria huwa loveria huwa ....:o)
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Kasto khatara RUINA ta ..thyakkai taha paune...he he he ...may be quite experienced? umm...well me don't know....he he he....
Anyway...God gave me the passion to love, and SHE lit the flame......that's all...he he he

Kasto khatara RUINA ta ..thyakkai taha paune...he he he ...may be quite experienced? umm..............>>>>
dil ka dr;)

ruIna very nice ,simple.short very goood :) well i was goin thru it dyamn suddenly flash back bhai ra........... was thinking abt mah mates where they are now and all those stuffss

Quick question which college did u go to?

Ruina jee, ramro cha, malai ramro laagyo, tara I think its more fiction....................... Khai k ho k ho..........Yeuta kura, do u think testo huncha in two years time when in reality u r more than happy to leave college,........................

Malai ta college chod da kasto ramailo laageko thiyo, tyo principal ko anu haar pani hernu naparne, tyo teacher haru ko anuhaar pani hernu naparne. Tyo paale ko dusthari kura pani sunnu naparne. Sathi haru bahira bhet bhai haalcha (close ones).
Aba ta tyo cafeteria ko kuhiyeko samosa khaana pani naparne, kya ananda. Bihana bihana uniform laaunu pani naparne. Kasto irritating uniform, Maroon and White.

No more hanging around with junkies, Naya baneswor, tinkune ko junky haru.

I dunno know if I was happy or sad but definately I never wanted to go to school back again. The couple of things I liked were my frens and basketball court. Otherwise i never in my entire college life, never wanted to enter that gate.

I wish I was also in college with ruina jee. Khai college miss bhai haalthyo ki.

Malai ta college chod da kasto ramailo laageko thiyo, tyo principal ko anu haar pani hernu naparne, tyo teacher haru ko anuhaar pani hernu naparne. Tyo paale ko dusthari kura pani sunnu naparne
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he he he he he ...harkedai.....kina khali principal, teacher, pale ko anuhar herdai basya ta???..he he he .......If you have gone for the face of someone special...then I bet ; you sure wouldn't have felt happy to leave the college....he he he

harkey dai:O)
hmm man pareena reh:@
malai ta mero best year of my life;)college life.
canteen ko samosh ta thikkai lagthiyo tara canteen ma antakshree kheldai baseko miss huncha,pale dai le complete uniform nahunda pani" plzzz dai bholi lagayera aunchu ni"bhanda khissa hasera class jana diyeko miss huncha.(especially shoes.)uniform ta compulsory thiyo..dress ta malai man parcha mero college ko.grey pant...white shirt:)
close fren..when i was in college whole class nai majority nai close thiyo ....aba bahira bhetuu bhanda pani dherai jana bahira try garne bhandai thiyo...bhaneko jasto kaha bhetnu pauncha ra:o(
class bunk garera whole class quiz competetion hernu gayeko thiyo hamro batch....teacher haru ko complain katti sunnu parthiyo but we were best section:)unity thiyo,result pani ramrai aunthiyo class attend nagare pani....
principle ko pendulic motion miss huncha,tp mam ko gali miss huncha:(
i miss everything abt my college life. college chode dekhi kahile janu payeko chaina ....gaye pani aba ta ko bhetcha hola ra:(
ladies toilet agadi basera yati dherai guff garthiyo bababa kurai nagarnu naa..miss hagging around with frens..kahile nasakeena guff hamro.
joslai man lagyo uslai jiskako cha ...........naiiiiiiiiiiiiii malai college janu man lagyo

u should be with us k ani balla fiction lagdaina thiyo:O)


anyway thanks harkey dai.

shaq:)
thanks.
Quick question which college did u go to?..............>>>
NIST

he he he he he ...harkedai.....kina khali principal, teacher, pale ko anuhar herdai basya ta???..he he he .......If you have gone for the face of someone special...then I bet ; you sure wouldn't have felt happy to leave the college....he he he >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
K ko someone special ni bro ? Sabai ko face lai tehi principal ko face le dominate gari halyo ni. Someone special ko face herna ta bahira pani mili haalcha ni broda. Bhitra goyera, special ko face herda pani buda ko nai face dekhincha ra po dikka laagne. Tesh mathi tyo master haru ko face. Tyo khai k po padhauthyo SKN lai dekhyo ki malai tesai ris uththyo. K ko some one special ko face ni bro. Someone special ko face herna ta bahira jaane yaar.


u should be with us k ani balla fiction lagdaina thiyo:O)

anyway thanks harkey dai.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
I wish I was there with u, hajur haru ko college ajha memoreable hunthyo, saath ma mero pani. Ani fiction jasto pani lagdaina thyo.

reminded me of the good ol days too..................miss those times

i am still in school but it just ain't the same here

Bhitra goyera, special ko face herda pani buda ko nai face dekhincha ra po dikka laagne..............funny harkedai....he he he.... katai tyo someone tehi principal ko daughter ta parena....he he ....

LOL harkey dai. special ko anuhar ma pani principle dekhnu thalnu bhayo areee!!kasto bijog condition raichaa..
thx aeutiketi for dropping by...
continued...

with thoughts on my head i kept walking same path ..my silence church way...as i walked closer.
i saw paras infront of the church gate...i was shocked!
he was leaning against the wall with his hands jammed in his pocket,looking down ..
as he soon as he saw me he smiled and walked towards me.
i said;aree!! paras,i smiled and asked;kaslai kurerakheko ?(waiting for someone?)
he said;nah; was praying .
i said; uh huh.
i was quiet debating wether or not to go on my own way.i glanced at my watch it was 2:22pm.
hmm i cleared my throat.."should i leave u than.."
he said.."was waiting for u.i knew u would come this way.so i kept waiting u here."
i asked him with ackward question;why?hmm so come to say good bye then?
he said,yah..couldn't go without seeing u?
well i smiled and asked him;how did u do ur finals??
he shrugged ,bio is not my cup of tea.how abt u?
ohki i guess.
i essayed a small smile.
another shrug,we'll see,he sighed.
what??i asked.
its hard to believe isn't it?he asked wistfully.
what?
part of our life is over ruina.2 yrs sure went fast.
yes ,yes they did i said feeling suddenly as heavy load has been placed on my soulders.
i smiled,i slouched forward and took out deep breath.
i am sorry he said unexpectedly.
huh??
i coudln't see ur dance on welcome programme last time.
ohh,its ohki..it was bad..dont talk abt it.i said with smile.
he searched smth in his pocket..."did u lost smth?"i asked.
here,hmm this is for u.i thought it slipped out of my pocket.well i made my way here to give u this letter.
whats that?i asked.
he turned slightly to my right side so that i was facing him.he looked at meh and said"this is for u"
well i was in dillemma... i kept asking myself.would he be angry if i dont...would it be appropriate if i just ignore abt that letter.my heart was not excepting and my hand was moving forward to get that letter. i stopped suddenly
and asked "whats in here?"as soon as i was abt to reach he moved it out of the way before i could take it.i looked at him with mixture of confusion and curiosity.
"it is for meh isn't it?"
yes yes..it is he siad.but i need u to promise me something.
what?
he gazed into my eyes"promise me"
he said haltingly "that u wont open this until u reach home."
i want reply on farewell day.
my eyes narrowed a bit why?
he pulled envelope bit farther way .promise me.he said imploringly.
i sighed...
ohki,i promise.he placed the envelope into my free hand .i accepted with confusion.and wordlessly.
looked at my watch it was time for me to leave.breaking the silence that had come between us with jarring insistent dinging sound'
well i said;i should go now.see u on sat thn,
he said ohki see ya.
i turned towards the road and started to make exit.as i did i felt marty tug at myhand .i didn't looked back.

Nice narration Ruina..keep good works going...mero aali fursaat nabhayekole lekhna bhyairakheko chhaina..aali lekhechhi post garchhu hai..keep waiting...;-)...
ANyways..GOOD to see ur works...
Take care,
Nirman

Greatttttttt....Ruina le pani khatara lekhdo rahecha story ta...clap clap clap .......he he
"...would it be appropriate if i just ignore abt that letter.my heart was not excepting and my hand was moving forward to get that letter"....is it accepting or excepting...confused!!! ......Bhanepacchi Kucch to feeling tha Paras ke liyee....he he he

"ohki,i promise.he placed the envelope into my free hand .i accepted with confusion.and wordlessly.".....Paras le po don't see what is inside bhanee promise garayeko thio....hamlai bhanda ta ke nai hunthyo ra tyo inside ma ke thio bhanera.... he he he.....

"he said,yah..couldn't go without seeing u?" Malai ta paras ko po maya layera ayyo....

ruIna ji, the male character in ur "non-fictional", ta mai hu ke kya hO?aamai, malai ta saachi, aali aali sanka lagna lagyo!!!.....
yar, yo ke aapat aai lagyo, are u really......, no u cant be her?

OMG...are u really her? :DDD....i m soo excited....+ u know wat, nevermind

nevermind, again
ruinaji, continue w/your life(last day of ur college)...i wana hear some more,
then i will jump to the conclusion...

;)...<--- wink ho hai

pease ;ut