WHO WILL DIE FIRST

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Allegro

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Sorry about your loss. Love your writing though as usual.

behoove_me

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Appreciate your concern allegro, I wish it sinks in soon enough.

mercynova

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Sorry for your loss, May her soul rest in peace.

behoove_me

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Thank you Mercy.

goddamn

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May her soul rest in peace.
One thing caught my attention was your urge to call your ex-gf and tell her that you still loved her. Thats a slippery slope broda, be carefull while u step on it. Very good writing as usual.

adventurer

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One of the best I have read in Sajha so far.

behoove_me

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Thank you from the bottom of my heart adventurer and goddamn, as you might have seen, it is not a work of fiction this time. She was very dear to us.

To answer your question goddamn, it is indeed a slippery slope, where feelings for each other might have escalated had I done that. But then the implied fact here is, I was so distressed by the departure of a close friend, I just wanted to reach out to everyone and tell them that I love them before I lose them. I mentioned my ex girlfriend because I could have called everyone without hesitation but her. And of course, it was also because of the mixture of alcohol and my eccentricity.

Funny as it might sound, you chose to pick only that part. :)

nayayana

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Geology Tiger

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enjoyed your story behoove...

edipre

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I understand the loss of near and dear ones.RIP to departed soul.As always great writing.

dipika02

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Behoove, you are one of those writers who writes from the heart. Please do keep it up.

Pokhrelikanchi

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sarai marmik lagyo . Yestai yestai ghatana mero chimek ma pani pareko thiyo , ahile timro katha padera tehi yaad ayo

halo

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Enjoyed the read.

ThahaChaena

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Behoove daai I was about to complain as I read you sentence ".....I mean why can’t a Nepali act like one among others? Why does it always have to be about the antagonism, ego and quest to urbanize all the time?" kina ki I have faced and noticed this everytime even today..... tara tapai ko baki story padhey pachi aakha talpal bhayera aayo ani life is not about complaining its about enjoying this moment and cherishing the memories bhanya justo lagyo.... It was beautifully woven story daai. I am sorry for your loss, May shova antie rest in peace .