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This is our second effort to make short movie after MO:MO.None of us went to film school, none of us are professional in this field but we all tried to do something during our leisure. An honest feedback and ur support can help us improve ourself in the future.salud!!!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oDxMcP3vgeQ&feature=player_embedded

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ANS

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good concept and overall nice presentation with the resources you had. As you said, you all are amateur people, ....but I feel - facial expressions need a bit more 'intensity' in acting .. but it was a good effort.

. Keep it up and come up with similar new ideas and creation... all the best!.

ANS

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OK.. for those people who did not understand the story-

The main character in this movie (boy) was chatting with a spirit (aathma) in this movie... the girl he saw in the window was a spirit. The moment he saw the girl at the window, she was already dead, coz in the video when the guy calls 911, the main character opens his window i.e- it is the moment he saw the girl..

007rozan

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@u. good explanation

furke

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Waiting for your new video... With better light effects and cast.

007rozan

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@furke. give us few more week. we wont disappoint u this time

furke

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Rozan:
I am not disappointed rather happy to see your videos.
It's cool. Keep such videos coming. All the best wishes and happy new year!!!

Stiffler

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One of the better Nepali short I have seen. Here's my rating:

Camera: B+
Good shots and angles. Can still be better.

Editing: A
Great editing and story telling style with limited resources.

Story: C
The ghost switcharoo is a washed-up subject since "The Ghost" and "The Sixth Sense."

Music: A
Fits well with storyline.

Overall: B+
A well worthy experiment. I can see a lot of potential. Did u take film making class?

terobaaje

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damn, jiu nai siringgaaa bhayo now that i know its a bhoot LOL

007rozan

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@stiffler: thanx a lot for ur grading.

007rozan

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@stiffler: thanx a lot for ur grading.

Zeong

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its a really good attempt......

don't take it seriously ANS you should have quoted that your answer was from someones comment on youtube....just kidding...

BostonKtm

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youtube short films contest. Should be your next stop... its really worth watching.. even though it was tragic endings.. i hope you guys should come up with some happy ending next time... Enough of tragic endings everywhere.. we want some positiveness in the yr of 2011.. Happy News to all the Sajha Visitors.. Cheers