aboiii yo nepchu lai bela bela ma ke hunchha kunni?
it's awesome, no doubt on that, after all it's written by "Nepchu The Great" 
but my friend it's scary too. Aba ramailo poem lekhata khurukka 
आम्बो ब्रो त बबाल सेन्टी भछन्त हौ। के स्स्स्स्स्स्स्स्स्स्स्सारो लेखेको हौ
Nice one there, enjoyed it!!
Prerana, everything is fine at my side. Thank you very much your concern and support. 
A little bird told me that you are working on a romantic poem. When will we be blessed to read that master piece? 
CL, that was a nice song you mentioned there. When someone tries to define the reality life, these words from Emerson comes to my mind - "Life is a train of moods like a string of beads; and as we pass through them they prove to be many colored lenses, which paint the world their own hue, and each shows us only what lies in its own focus." Thank you very much for the support, glad that you liked those lines.
Dipu, hahaha "Nepchu The Great"... that was quite an honor which I think I don't deseve. As always, I am indebted for those inspiring remarks of yours. Ok, I promise to bring something joyous next time.
Cheli Sis, thank you very much for your encouragement. Regarding your doubt, I am not a pessimist by any means. Gloominess and felicity are two sides of the coin called life. It was just an attempt to explore a bit of dark side of the life this time; I have depicted bright side of the life in earlier attempts. As Carl Jung says : "There are as many nights as days, and the one is just as long as the other in the year's course. Even a happy life cannot be without a measure of darkness, and the word 'happy' would lose its meaning if it were not balanced by sadness."
Yakku bro, long time no see. How are things rolling at your side? The era of bad dreams is already over; it was just an attempt to uncover some somberness that life may have to encounter once in a blue moon.
Kalejo bro, thank you for dropping by to leave a humorous note. You will be glad to hear that I am fully fit and fine, was just trying to reflect some melancholy in those lines; nothing serious. 
Juggy bro, thanks for a good laugh. You don't need to drink few bottles of whiskey to pretend that you are drunk, do you? Good to hear that the stanzas were able to bask you.
MNO jyu, I am glad to know that you liked those verses. Thank you very much for your supportive note.
Cappy, nice to see you here. How you doing recently? Hope everything is well with you. I appreciate your boosting annotation. :)
Jhilke bro, it's nice to see you alive and kicking here in sajha again. Thank you very much for those charging words.
Maddogg, I will be more than happy if you want to transform those words into a song. Please feel free to do so.
Sujaata, I am glad to hear that you liked those lines, thank you very much for those boosting phrases.
Last but not the least, I convey my gratitude to all the silent readers as well.
A little bird told me
nk chora, pakha na bharkar ta mero kabita ko title jurye ko cha, pura bhaisak pachi sunai halchu ni -- oh yeah it sure will be a masterpiece lol
ठुल्दाइ, हजुरको जाच अवश्य पनि राम्रो भयो होला। ब्यस्त भए पनी पढेर दुई शब्द ब्यक्त गरिदिनु भएकोमा आभारी छु।
Prerana, just title so far? We all are eagerly waiting for your masterpiece. Please, don't make this wait long one.
Aashma, I am overwhelmed by your words. Thanks a lot for those inspiring remarks.
"So many tricks and then so many lies,
Too many whens, whats and too many whys."
I think everyone goes thru these phases in any relationships. Some see it, some do not. some understand it, some do not. But putting it in words you have done a great job. I, very much like your poem. Kudos Nepal's son!!! Keep flowing.
knock in my door, yes its the night
the day is over again
it was so bright all this long but
darkness has won again
covering up the lonliness blanket
I vanish into myself again
i see memory-wagon in front of my eyes
carrying my own past again
restrained by the screech of silence
I fail to hear my own voice again
batteling in the borders of my eyes
my tears gain victory again
facing towards cracked mirror
I seekout for myself again
continuing sitting like this,
eternity keeps repeating again and again
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