Pacifier, thank you very much for the "optimistic extension" of the poem. Glad to have you here in the thread.   

Cerine, I am happy to hear that you found those lines "awsome". Thanks for short yet sweet compliment.

Dannah bro, I really appriate your suggestion. I will try to come up with something "un-dammed" next time hai ta. Thanks for dropping by to leave a note.

Cheli, thank you very much for those generous note and facilitatory suggestion. It gives a sense of satisfaction when the readers come up with nice words.  

नेत्रे जी, तपाईं लाई कबिता  राम्रो लागेको सुन्दा मलाई पनि खुशी लाग्यो। पढेर प्रतिकृया स्वरुप दुई शब्द छोडिदिनु भको मा मुरी मुरी धन्यवाद छ। 

Thulee, I am glad that you liked those lines. Thank you very much for the boosting phrase.

Pjna (Aka Prerana), life is like a pendulum whose extremities are "elation" and "depression". The leg of the pendulum swings from one end to another periodically. So, expressing something on gloomy part of the life once in a blue moon is not a bad idea, is it? I am glad that you found a "masterpiece" in those verses. Thank you  very much for those charging remarks.

Dipu, thank you very much for those respectable words. Frankly speaking, I don't want readers to revere my stanzas. I appreciate it when they come up with their honest comment/reactions. But it does give a bit of self-satisfaction when readers like the work. Thanks for your continuous support which means a lot to me.