Intriguing disconnection
An enchanting repartee
Between you and me
Was stopping the ticking clock
And calming my living block
Utter silence and tranquillity around
Simply the echoes of a soothing sound
Came from the wires as we proceeded
And my heart only conceded
To the sweetness of a nightingale tone
As if there was no tomorrow to come
As if my metabolism needed no rest
I was in a mood to wait and wait
To listen the sound waves from wires
That struck and echoed in my ears
Flap!
All of a sudden
And to my unfathomable surprise
Abruptly the line demised
Dead silence ruled as it disconnected
Without any warning
Without any reasoning
Leaving me in melancholy
And pensiveness
I am awestruck in kind of despair
Was it a technical monster?
Or some monstrous thoughts overpowered us
to you, me or to both?
Hope the clock ticks quickly to the dawn
And let me know what the reason was
Or the wires may not be reconnected again.
Newuser,
I have a BIG problem. Could you please suggest me what I should do?
I know the meaning of each WORD. Even if I do not, I can see in the dictionary.
BUT,
The PROBLEM is: I can not understand the meaning of the SONGS and POEMS written in ENGLISH. This rule does not apply in case of STORIES. What is lacking on me?
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>the wires may not be reconnected again.
Newuser,
Hope the wires will be reconnected again after "THE LOST KEY" being found.
Good job bro!
Hope more from you.
ओकेजी साँच्चै नवुझ्या हो ?
कुरा के भने कविताको पात्र, मानौं X कसैसंग टलिफोनमा रमाइलो कुराकानी गरिराथ्यो। अचानक लाइन काट्टियो अनि उसलाई नरमाइलो लाग्यो। किन अनायाश यस्तो भयो ? कवितामा उसले सोधिरहेको छ। फेरी पढ्नुस त अव वुझिन्छ।
दादा धन्यवाद। चावीको कथा त उहिल्यै सकियो, हैन र ?
The Reason:
Too many times has a death message
Come late at night
For me not to fill with fear
When the telephone pulls me awake.
And when I hear the voice
I know the news is bad.
He asks me why do I think so
And I say the battery is dead. :d
We talk a long time
Even with the peeps on our ears
Everything was uncertain
Not knowing when the
Dead silence would take place.
Then all of a sudden
There is a silence on the end of the phone,
Grief, loss, disconnection,
And yet something else,
Something like rejection.
The phone fills with silence.
There is nothing left to say
Except to wait for the other day.
Ah! but,
Would you change your perception,
Toss out every uncertainty,
Tear up your calling cards,
If I told you...
I feel close vibes in the very ether
that connects the distance which separates us!?
:)
Phone Buzzes, heart Jigs
I turned anemic on the phone
The hit of coins in the telephone box
The Moment!
The Words!
Hushed hearsay to swap
Couldn't You Say to
The wishes were whispers
And they didn't go through
Two psyches murmur in the same idiom
And talk of many things, formless.
Nothing righteous can come from it
but pigeons have germs.....
Ashley!
WET IN LOVE!
A rain drop, ?plup?.
Then another drop, ?plup?.
My blind eyes catches the plup.
And the wind sings,
They come! They come!
Trashing, Rushing they come!
So I fly, inside the nucleus of a universe.
Plup Plup Plup Plup Plup Plup Plup
Thousands of Plups.
She hits me, all over ( from my head to my toe)
I am wet,
Wet in love.!
I gallop like a horse, only without a forward move
I land, A BIG BANG!!
Diamonds scatter!
Life begins!
In a sudden cosmos dampens,
But the drop still plups
I so am still wet,
Wet in love!
Ashley, a very nice creation. Formless talks, abstract talks, she moves, I hate, He said, but pigeon have germs ? A telephone talk.
Enjoyed the short piece, thax.
OK,
A life is a life, need for its understanding isnt obvious. Similar is with poems.
A poem is like a rubber, it should bend, strech, the WAY YOU WANT, but dont dare to go far, it will break, you loose the meaning.
Do not worry about silly words, such as: Creativity and Imagination, they are for poets, to claim themselves.
Reading a poem should be as easy as ridding a RoLLer Coaster, you heart should beat with some different beats than usual, it should give you thrills and chills like bungy jumping.
:)
hyaa, lekhchu lekchu bhanda bhandai kyaa birseko...
hey Sitara ;)
Matrixrose, that was so sweet. ;>
the following day, the sun may rise
but by then, the full moon dies
Sitara, oh my joys! I claim that I am one of your greatest fans. Kina sustataauno bhayo aaja bholi? sajha khallo laging these days :)
I am yet to enlighten
to change my perception
Ashley, seems you have been enjoying many dances since you requested to save the last one.
I was 'khangranga' when two psyches murmered
but pigeons have germs, You are right!
Perplexed,
Fantasy is the sweetest ambrosia, isn't it?
Yeh, if poems had any rules and poets had any boundry, there would have been very few poems and I would never have been a 'poet'.
Keep coming guys. Kamsekam lekhna janne haru le dui char tukra lekhde hamlai inspiration milthyo ni.
Matrixrose, that was so sweet. ;>
the following day, the sun may rise
but by then, the full moon dies
.......................................................................................................
Did I ever care?
Did I ever care?
Oh sweetheart!
I know you cared. :)
Angelic Love
Baby,
As I am gazing at,
Your alluring eyes
Your beautiful lips
Your blushy cheeks
Your crisp nose
Your charming teeth
Your cute smile
Your inviting stare
Your angelic face,
I found ocean
I found moon
I found dream
I found spring
I found light
I found delight
I found fire
I found desire
And, what not?
I found LOVE.
-newuser
tringgggg tringggg............
हलो! को बोल्?नुभाको?
नमस्?ते! म ओके बोलेको अमेरिकाबाट। त्?यहा मन्?जु छ।
ए! मन्?जुलाई खोज्?नुभएको? एकैछिन है।
मन्?जु! ए मन्?जु! अमेरिकाबाट ओकेनानीको फोन आछ। झट्? आइज, झट्।
( मन्?जुलाई कुर्?दा कुर्?दै फोन काटिन्?छ र ओके माथीको कबिता सम्?झन्?छ.....)
U_day Jee,
Haha
A very NICE example to make Newuser's difficult (for me) poem easy to understand. I say it may happen, but you see ---. You know what is inside the dash-dash.
Cheers!
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