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mindGames

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evening sky the lone jet shines higher than the cresent moon. they must be going far... --- mG.

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Captain Haddock

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Very nice ojeswi - pretty strong emotions captured in those words. :)

ojeswi

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thanks haddock. i believe words are the only medium to let go of ur deepest emotions.

Juggy

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Last words before I vanish for time being!!! Wrote some time ago... I love you still... I hang on you!!! I hope for you; You beside me; and I die within!!! I hide.. I cry... I say I love you still... and I die within you!! I see myself still; but me within you!!! I see you still... but you within me!!! You and me, we live within; without me and you!! [][][][][] Hibernating!!!!!! *Gone*

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Greeting Folks! Good going here. Need some more of those powerful words! Loote Sir - Nice indeed. Let us hear few more pages from your diary. Captain - Don't they inspire you to pen down your thoughts? Never get tired of going through them again and again! Hope you had a wonderful saturday. Ojeswi - How about some more of them? :-) Juggy - My old pal, never knew this side of you. Thanks for sharing!

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. far , far than it seems oh! the light it dims the worlds not going to change only me , if i can corner life crisis but still , buried within myself i cant answer self am i living it right ? why ? why ? why georgia why ? everybody's just a stranger thats the danger and i seek for a reason ... reason to believe that i am living it right why ? tell me why ? why georgia why ? [ a little inspired with john mayer playin' in background :L ]

oldmaven

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. i missed the last line ! "evening sky"

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Oldmaven - Did you mention Georgia as a state? Just a curiosity! I can already hear a roar, something's is up for the revolution!

SEANDAI

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SNOOZE U LOOSE, THAT ROCKS MY SHOCKS

oldmaven

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. not me , rather it was JOHN MAYER ! and yeah , Georgia is a 'nice' sate , isnt it ? so is NORTH CAROLINA ! :) ... so is every other state! :P a little drunk i am , i admit ! :) Good Evening there!

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GEORGIA,CAROLINA, VIRGINIA ALL THE CONFEDERATE STATES DUDE, IF U GO FOR REAL STATE IS MA, NH, IL;THOSE PEOPLE LIBERATED AMERICA N SHOWED CANDLE TO THE WORLD. I HATE CONFEDERATE STATES. STILL RACISM N RED NECKS.....HATE RACISTS, KKK'S, ANGLO-OPERATORS. I LOVE THE SONG BY "BLACK EYED PEAS"---WHERE IS THE LOVE

SEANDAI

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UNION STATES ROCKS!!!!!!

oldmaven

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. HAHA .. sean dai , i dont care abt those stuffs .. NC is a great place to be .. for sure .. i mea n, i would like to !!! :) i am not there , by any chances , so am looking at the evening sky ! the focal point between the states !! :)

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Thanks captain bud and flips. hope you guys are having a great weekend. good going guys! here's another freakin piece :P A Bachelor Father An unwanted child, conceived by fault unaborted by default carried with a burden brought up in pain... I want to embrace her, carry her in my shoulder change her diaper hug her, kiss her and pamper and be her bachelor father!

mindGames

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Tires slippery rolling and bending, the rainy road unending... Mishap of heart, roadkill of love; for this kind of crash, the cops nowhere at the scene; the only siren: softly my heart rending... The red streaks of a passing car, slithery on wet tar like eyes after tear-shedding... Upon the intersection-left or right? Either way I end up wrong. --- mG.

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MG, superb as always. Your ability to paint a vivid story with such simple and terse wordings are amazing. Hope all's going with your stories and those middle lines :). Please do share more! PS. The pattern of global warming suggests that it might not be far fetched to say that it snows in adeleide :)

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mG - Lavishly written! Thanks for sharing.

Captain Haddock

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Flawless! MG, you are very talented - hope we get to read more. :)

ojeswi

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if a dinner and movie is a date you find, thats rare look in ur hi5 " top 6 friends"; you will find one there can't think of anything other reason why man would do they are so much trouble when standing next to you

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Sure you have good intentions. But I forgot to mention. All your charity is clouding up my clarity. Sounds like good advice but This is not your life and All your sincerity isn't really helping me .Don't catch me I'm not falling.Don't pick me up cause I'm not crawling I'll put the pieces together. Can't turn a rock to a feather.Please just let me be But don't give up on me. Not saying that you're not clever.Trying to make it all better I'm saying once again please Don't give up on me Here's the situation Thanks for your participation But I gotta figure out What I want to be about May be no consolation Imagine my frustration You're looking at the screen But I'm the one in who's in the scene Don't jump in I'm not drowningIt ain't as bad as it is sounding. I'll put the pieces together Can't turn a rock to a feather Please just let me be But don't give up on me Not saying that you're not clever Trying to make it all better I'm saying once again please Don't give up on

SEANDAI

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BUT STILL HAVEN'T FOUND WHAT I 'M LOOKIN FOR

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