मेरो असफल गुरु तिमी

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आफ्नो जस्तै निष्ठुरी किन बानि सिकाएनौ ।।
किन तिम्ले गरेजस्तै मलाई हानी सिकाएनौ ।।

तिम्रो याद दिन रात आइरहन्छ, किन यहाँ
लाग्छ यिनलाई तिमिले बैमानी सिकाएनौ ।।

सितल मात्र परिभाशा दियोउ सधै किन
मन उम्लेर पोखिन्छ आँखाका पानी सिकाएनौ ।।

गल्ति ठुलै गरे माया गरेर तिमीलाई मैले
रित्तिन्न मुटु झुकेर मायाको खानि सिकाएनौ ।।

जिउने तिमि बिना म उपाए खोजि डुलिरहे
थाथ्यो तिम्लाई तर तिमि जानी जानी सिकाएनौ ।।

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Mrigtrishna

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Wow! What a great thought punter. I am astonished to see people like you still exist. No , It's not you but your mindset here is troubling me. Why didn't anyone teach you to mind your own business? Why didn't anyone teach you to respect a girl in public? Why didn't anyone teach you what a real man is? But thank you .. you gave me a reason public places aren't for girls. You gave me a reason why a girl shouldn't talk to others.. be it what.. either literature or anything else. Thank you!
And yes, I fee so sorry for your sister, if you have any.

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निकै राम्रा हरफ हरू...सुनिन्छ बेजोड कबिता लेख्ने हरू कबिता बाचनमा नि उत्तिकै निपुण हुन्छन , अहिले सम्म त पढ्न पाईयो , आशा छ आगामी दिनहरूमा कुनै सभा मा प्रत्यक्ष हेर्न नि पाईयोस .. हजूरलाई दशैंको शुभकामना ! ... जडौ !

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पुन्तुरे ले दरो गाली खायो , नास ले जे गर्यो पछि पछि लागेर तेही गर्न खोज्थिस दनक मिल्यो नि अबत ...

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Mrigtrishna

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गज़ल मन पराइदिनु हुने सबै मा धेरै धेरै आभार ।

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मिर्गत्रिसनाजी; नाज ब्रो ले भनेको जस्तो गरि अन्जान मा गल्ति भयो एक पटक माफ गर्दिनु ल ! यो सबै धेरै जाड खाएर भाको हो !!! कृपया एक पटक माफ गर्दिनु हुन म पुन्टर हजुर लै भित्र मन देखि अनुरोध गर्दछु!!! अनि हजुरको गजल पनि राम्रो लग्यो, येस्तै येस्तै सिर्जना गर्दिए जानु ल!!!

Mrigtrishna

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That's fine punter. It's okay. गल्ति नदोहोर्यौनु होला । :)

Mrigtrishna

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Ur words are full of butter nasjee. I don't think you are always this polite... ha ha .. anyway.. thanks

Mrigtrishna

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धन्यवाद हजुर । शुभ रात्री अनि विजया दशमीको हार्दिक मंगलमय शुभकामना हजुरलाई ।

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सान मान ले नास मान प्लस उसका अवतारहरुलाई तलबी काज मै खटाको झैं मानेका छम् है हाम्ले अब। ह्याप्पी दसैं।

Mrigtrishna

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Lol.. nasjee you already have so much complaints.. I was about to raise the same issue again. Ha ha ha . Let it be now, seems like nobody is bothered.

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