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एका बिहानै उनले मलाई सरापेर गइ

यस्तो लाग्छ मिठो राग अलापेर गइ

आज मलाई दोबाटोमा फर्की फर्की हेरी

कर्के नजरले हेराइको गहिराइ नापेर गइ

कर्केर, तर्केर जाने आँखा खै कता हरायो

मधुर मुस्कानले रंग प्रणय छ्यापेर गइ

सोह्र शृंगारमा अझ कति राम्री आज त

नमेटिने तस्बिर मुटु भित्रै छापेर गइ

Bhaktey

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वाह ठुल्दाइ ...घाइतेनै परिछे ठुल्दाइलाइ मोरीले

"सोह्र शृंगारमा अझ कति राम्री आज त

नमेटिने तस्बिर मुटु भित्रै छापेर गइ "

Geology Tiger

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को रहेछ त आज बिहान बिहान ठुल्दाइलाई सरापेर जाने ?

enthusiast

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I am not a poet and I know Rahul bhai's penmanship is good. However, if I was writing this 'gazal' I would write either

एका बिहानै उसले मलाई सरापेर गइ

यस्तो लाग्छ मिठो राग अलापेर गइ

एका बिहानै उनले मलाई सरापेर गईन्

यस्तो लाग्छ मिठो राग अलापेर गईन्

Its a good one though!!

Thanks

shiva_linga

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thuldai ko post haru sadhai padhi ra kunchha .great work dai aaudai jaos !!!!

timi_mero_sathi

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वाह RV ji वाह,

हैन एकाबिहानै एक शोदषी ले तपाई लाई सप्पै गरेर गैछन ,

हाम्रो पानि चान्स आउला भनेर बसेको, हामीलाई केहि नगर्ने भइन

Rahuldai

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भक्ते दाई

सरापेर अलापेर गए सी घाइते नहुने त काइते मात्र हुन्छन नि , मखुला ??

बाघ दाई

शान्ति सुरक्षाको सवाल छ , को भनेर भन्न मिल्दैन .

Enthusiast जी

व्याकरणको हिसाब ले तपाइँ को सल्लाह एक दम सही हो तर चलनचल्ती को भाषा प्रयोग गरेको मात्र हु . क्षमा चाहन्छु . धन्यबाद !

शिब लिङ्ग जी

धन्यबाद अमुल्य शब्दहरुको लागि .

टीएमएस

चान्स आउछ साथी आउछ , ढुकेर बस्नु पर्छ , लुकेर बसेर कहाँ मौका पाइन्छ ??

मबी दाइ

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