पाठी भन्दा बोकै राम्रो हजुर थुन्से भन्दा डोकै राम्रो हजुर!! समिपमा उन्कै न्यानो स्पर्शले अंग अंग छोकै राम्रो हजुर कता कता लुकाएर राखेको लाजको त्यो पोकै राम्रो हजुर!! Gwach
gwach · Jul 23, 2012 3:50 AM · 2,497 views
With the innuendos flowing in the second and third para, the first para all of a sudden becomes a little...well creepy. Think about it. All in all, a good short poem.
Kiddo · Jul 23, 2012 8:00 AM
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