Nice work. It was good. As you've said there's a room for an improvement but overall it's great. 

Karnali Blues · May 6, 2012 11:06 AM

 Nice piece of work. keep it up.  

Nepalibhandu · May 6, 2012 11:24 AM

 Thanks

bibekhere · May 6, 2012 7:45 PM

 if this is not a copied story , i must say u all have done a good job, i like the girl act, she did fine with music score and voice over , good rec quality.edit is also fine, but it would have been more good ending if u would have end the story right after the closeup of the painting face from scene 5:30, with at least 5 sec of slow blak dissolve and give the credit title. anyway this was my constructive comment. keep it up ! Last edited: 08-May-12 12:30 PM

UFO · May 8, 2012 12:29 PM

The story is my original idea.  Copy is a harsh word. But if you observe  carefully you will see that i got inspired from other movies. The extremely close ups were inspired by an old silent film directed by French Legend Carl Dryer's "The passion of joan of arc". The peculiar design of costume is a tribute to the great silent films of German Expressionism. The tape recorder part is a tribute to Jean Luc Godard's "Breathless". The montage that you see in the movie was inspired by Sergei Eisentein's movies. Dissolving to the credits is a good idea. I was about to end the movie the exact same way. But, I decided to keep that part for no particular reason. May be because I am a big fan of Devkota. Anyways Thanks for the constructive comment.

bibekhere · May 9, 2012 8:17 AM