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ए बा - म आज मातिएर घर ढिलो फर्केको छु, किन ढिलो भनि हप्काउनुस्न | ए आमा - म अल्छि गरि खाना नखाई कम्प्युटरमा झुंडीराछु, आँखा बिग्रेला धेरै नहेर, उठेर खाना खा भन्नुसन | ए दिदि - मेरो कोठा सारै फोहोर भाको छ, लुगा नधोको धेरै भो, भाइले कोठा सफा गरेन भनेर ममीलाइ कुरा लाइदेन |  ए बहिनि - म इन्जिनिअर् बन्न लागिसके, तेरो म्याथको होमवोर्क मलाई आउछ, सोध्न | ए भाई - मैले नया मोबाइल किन्या छु, मलाई नसोधी तेरो थोत्रो छोडेर मेरो नया लैजान | ए दाइ - म गाडी चढ्ने भैसके,  तै नि मलाई तेरै बाईक चढ्नु छ, एकछिन साचो देन | ए साथी - मेरो त यो पाली नि tragedy पर्यो यार, पार्टी दे न त भनेर मेरो बिल्ला उडान | missing those moments ...

kanchho bhai · Mar 5, 2012 8:34 PM · 19,086 views

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 peom not sure touching absolutely 

adventurer · Mar 5, 2012 10:54 PM

:( miss those days . as somome says. kaas tyo pal pharkera aaune bhaye.

facebook · Mar 6, 2012 2:15 AM

Nice one bro.

HyolmoPa · Mar 6, 2012 5:43 AM

Very well put. A different twist to Amaile Sodhlin ni.

Stiffler · Mar 6, 2012 8:38 AM

Thank you adventurer, facebook, hyolmopa and stiffler for the inputs and also thanks to all the silent readers.

kanchho bhai · Mar 6, 2012 6:33 PM

@kanchho bhai: no need to label this thing as kabota, katha, nibandha, or so. Art is a form of expression and you've expressed yourself beautifully.

jay-z · Mar 7, 2012 11:15 AM

Thanks jayZ

kanchho bhai · Mar 9, 2012 12:25 PM

 nice one 

bikramtempo · Mar 9, 2012 12:32 PM

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