La feri tehi kura. That's why ta haru sanga kura garera faida chaina. I said give constructive criticism. That means that give them an opportunity to improve, not bash their looks or belittle their efforts: Yeha pad mora ho constructive criticism bhaneko yesto huncha. "सुधार गर्न पर्ने ठाउँहरु नभएको होइन, तर पनि प्रयास राम्रो छ, अब आउने भिडियोहरु अझ स्तरीय हुँदै जाउन्, शुभकामना" Belittle garne bhaneko yesto huncha "Actors were OK.. the singer actor wasn't the greatest looking though... Voice sucked." Murkha keta ho. Pahile constructive criticism garna sikh. Ani tes pachi ma sanga kura garna aija. Kaha kaha bata auchan murkha haru. hare raam. 

fountaindew · Oct 16, 2011 2:15 AM

 fountaindew ko chitta bujhaunai bhayepani lekhnai paryo, - vocal > not good except the chorus singer i.e. "kasari baachu yo..." - lyrics > ok ok - music composition > good - videography > sucks - models > good And here's my explanation:   Vocal: the rapper's voice is very flat, and it sounds dull. have you heard Prabin Giri read news on Nepal Television? sounds like that. idk if he meant to make him sound like that or that's the best he can do, but his voice utterly failed to please my ears. However, the chorus singer's voice is good (the guy who sang "kasari bachu yo" part). Lyrics: same old boring tragic lyrics, nothing new but still, has a story. I'd say the lyrics is good but there are some words that could have been replaced by better words. But it seems like they wanted to create good rhyme which compromised the words. Music composition: Doesn't have too many musical instruments involved but still rich sound. Simple yet well composed. Videography: This is where the boys failed quite very well. First thing, the video quality is very poor. It's not sharp at all, looks like it came straight out of a beginner/semi pro dslr with very minimal editing. Second, videographer focusses on girls butt quite a bit. That makes the girl look cheap as others have pointed out. It also distracts audience. The song is about a tragic lovestory, not about a jolly romantic story. Video is out of focus at some points, maybe the videographer wasn't able to focus quickly enough. And, it's shaky sometimes.  Models: The girl looks good and so do the other two guys. However, girl's dresses are immodest. I was able to notice her in two different dresses during the video and both dresses were very similar except the color. I ask myself "Why?" and the most obvious answer to me is "they want to spice up the video" but too much of a spice is not good. Moreover, videographer focussing more on her butt makes the video more sucky.  I don't know if this is their first video or they have already produced a few before. If this is their first or second video, I give 5.5/10 if this is their 3rd+ video then it ranks 3.5/10. fountaindew, this is for you: everyone doesn't have to like the video. Some people honestly don't like the video, others might not like it just because they don't like someone do/try to do something good. There can be various reasons behind it. Also, people have tendency to point out bad more than good things so it's natural to get comments on weaknesses more than on strengths when you ask for criticism. So, please stop using obscene words at others, it just makes you look like an idiot.  -Jantare

jantare1 · Oct 16, 2011 10:03 AM

 Not a big hiphop fan, but if there is melody i'd love it, just like this.

atomic · Oct 16, 2011 10:57 AM

 And about my comment, chorus's vocal is good , rapper's idk either. Video don't even goes at all with the song. Chick gotta fine a$$. 

atomic · Oct 16, 2011 11:14 AM

fountaindew, kina tatteko, timro girlfriend/boyfriend cha ki k ho video ma. ramro laagey ramro , naramro laagey naramro bhanney ho, tesma timlai k ko tauko dukhai.. ani free ma payeko song rey, ??? k hamley tini haru lai 'eh song yaha sajha ma rakha bhaneko hora?' tini haru aafailey free ma rakhey pachi, timi chahi kina tuk-na-betuk ko kura garcheu hah?  youtube ma free hudaina, my dear friend, you post a video, monetize it , youtube place an ad and everytime someone watches it , they make money,.. ma mula kehi nagari mahina ma 200-300 bucks banauchu( I do post gadget reviews once in a while though, that's the trick) .. yeh.. herney haru lai free nai huncha video haru, dekhauney haruley paisa banaucha.. ani fountaindew, don't generalize everyone okay?? that's the lesson number 1. yeha online ma jati ufrey ni huncha, real life ma?? if you act like here, you might hurt yourself.. take it as a suggestion / advice whatever. tesailey, dherai bak-bak garney hoina, khurukka gayera aafno kaam garney, hoina bhaney pheri gala-sala padkai dinchu... hahahahhahahaha..

bittertruth · Oct 16, 2011 12:52 PM