Hello friends we are about to write a 60-70 Page story, about a single women living in kathmandu. So i need your help to best write the story. At the end i dont want to say look this is my story as well. So i assure you all to be added in the credits as well. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Character: Sunita is a women who has come to kathmandu after she married her husband but her husband left for working abroad so she is alone in Kathmandu. Monica: sunita's Friend Deepak: Sunita's First Lover Ravi: sunita's Husband 1) Sunita is a married single woman in kathmandu. Her husband is working abroad. So she parties a lot, and a lot of attention from many different males. Her life is great in other words but she also has problems. 2) Sunita would be introduced to drugs by her best friend monica, loneliness and her husband might be the causes. 3) she wont receive calls from her husband because she would know that he has a mistress there in abroad. 4) sunita would find a guy called Deepak who she falls in love with. 5)Deepak too needs to go abroad for furthur work. 6) sunita and monica would have such causes so they are pushed towards prostitution. 7) sunita due to her harsh lifestyle falls sick 8) monica dies some how. 8) then someone calls sunita's husband for help 9) instead of her husband, deepak would come back for help, he would know some how that sunita is ill. 10) sunita and deeepak would live together. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- This is my frame work. Problems: 1) i dont have a good cause for these girls turn to prostitution 2) I dont have a good antagonist 3) how shall sunita start taking drugs so that it becomes very interesting 4) how to make deepak's and sunita's love deeeper 5) How to add some suspense, drama 6) how to add some humour 7) what could be sunita's problems 8) What could be monica's problems 9) Need hundreds of interesting mini events 10) Need a very interesting twist that people might not even come close to prediction :D 10) and many more things missing to be a beautiful story. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- So guys if you wanna work in this collaborative project pls let me know i shall email other info as well. other wise you can just post me some interesting ideas so that the story would turn interesting. Am crossing my fingers :D ; i know sajha members are really creative and if this works it would be the very first time of some wonderful method of working. I know it needs a lot of critical thinking but i dont think its impossible. So Everyone lets work this out. I wish to be Hit with something very intersting and mind blowing. Last edited: 12-May-11 12:07 PM
punkbuddhaz · May 12, 2011 11:40 AM · 576 views
I like this story already
sajha onion · May 12, 2011 12:21 PM
the framework of story sounds good but it's not different than what we see everyday, either in movies or in our neighborhood. adding something new would make it better.
jantare1 · May 12, 2011 2:16 PM
Nice effort but does not sound uniq/orignal story plot, resembles more like another bollywood story.. Please come up with something 'Nepali' in its content..
ANS · May 12, 2011 2:52 PM
Hey thnks a lot frends, @Shajha Onion, ya its kind of likable so am working but for a long story we need many more things thats why am expecting some brain processing :D !! what do u say :D @Jantare1: Exactly its a common story but am searching for things which could be introduced which would make it uncommon. @ANS: As we are assuming this is a nepali story which happens in the city of kathmandu, we are doing research based on this one, certainly we shall try to be unique to a nepali story. Or you can suggest me something as well, we can go that way as well. Am expecting someone who says how about this kind of plot or something like that. :D Thnks a lot
punkbuddhaz · May 12, 2011 8:34 PM
3) how shall sunita start taking drugs so that it becomes very interesting She's bored cos her husband is not there so she starts experimenting with drug with Monica 1) i dont have a good cause for these girls turn to prostitution Drugs start becoming an expensive habit. 4) how to make deepak's and sunita's love deeeper steamy online scene 5) How to add some suspense, drama A voyeuristic neighbor Karma 2) I dont have a good antagonist Karma 6) how to add some humour by saying funny things 7) what could be sunita's problems lonelyness, money, desires 8) What could be monica's problems same as above 9) Need hundreds of interesting mini events Karma tries to get to Sunita through Monica 10) Need a very interesting twist that people might not even come close to prediction :D Monica is Sunita's pseudo imaginary self that she had created to overcome her lonelyness
grgDai · May 13, 2011 10:04 AM
@grgDai Umm i really find all your answers great ;D !! I know that all of the answeres were kinda predictible but still. I really loved the way u easily took those answers, am thankful for that :D !! I loved the introduction of karma, and answer number 10, about pseudo imaginary thing. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Actually from others review i was thinking that this whole story was a bit more predictible so, i was thinkin to change the whole frame. WHat do u advice? And with yours answers and finalizing everything do u think a very good story which would be so interesting be created ? Have you thought of any other options to make this more spicy. I heartly thank you for ur reply !! Jaya Nepal
punkbuddhaz · May 13, 2011 10:48 AM
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