रोना आया एै मोहब्बत तेरे अँजामपे रोना आया जाने क्युँ तेरे नाम पे रोना आया ॥ युँतो हर शाम उम्मिँदोमे गुजर जाति थि आज कुछ बात है जो शाम पे रोना आया ॥ ... कभि तकदिरका मातम् कभि दुनियाका गिला "मँजिल-ए-ईश्क" मे हर गमपे रोना आया ॥ जब हुवा जिक्र जमानेमे मोहब्तका - मुझे अपने दिल-ए-नाकाम पे रोना आया ॥ ----------------------------------------------------- - Typed in Hindi/Nepali by SimpLe_KeTa - Origional: Bushra Dilmir (Pakistan) ----------------------------------------------------- Ghazal in 4 couplet style. Last edited: 24-Jul-10 12:29 PM
Simple_KeTa · Jul 24, 2010 12:22 PM · 7,244 views
युँतो हर शाम उम्मिँदोमे गुजर जाति थिआज कुछ बात है जो शाम पे रोना आया ॥...........वाह वाह वाह
guchcha chor · Jul 24, 2010 5:20 PM
Beautiful lyrics.
deshbhaktanepali · Jul 24, 2010 8:17 PM
kabhee khud pe, kabhee haalaat pe ronaa aayaa baat nikalee to, har yek baat pe ronaa aayaa hum to samaze the ke hum bhool gaye hain unako kyaa huaa aaj ye kis baat pe ronaa aayaa kis liye jite hain hum kis ke liye jite hain baarahaa ayaise sawalaat pe ronaa aayaa kaun rotaa hain kisee aaur kee khaatir aye dost sab ko apane hee kisee baat pe ronaa aayaa I dont know who copied whom but a similar lyrics was from Movie :Hum Dono - 1961 गीतकार :साहिर लुधियानवी
Korean_Soju · Jul 24, 2010 9:27 PM
korean_Soju नमस्ते । Movie :Hum Dono - 1961 गीतकार : साहिर लुधियानवी । Thanks for the info. Issue let there be not who copied who. It is Ghazal and only Ghazal itself should be the issue. "Happy Birthday To You" has been written, rewritten, ?Copied many several times. Nobody cares. CopyRight act has very clear instructions on "how to". I searched, googled साहिर लुधियानवी http://www.hindilyrix.com/lyri... and your provided lines. Beautiful they are. If both Ghazals are from same writers, which differ in artistic styles; I suppose they are from various period of writer's time. Nice to meet one more Dard-e-Ghazal. आशिकि मेरि आशिकोमे बदनाम हो गयि दिल अपनि दिवानगिसे बदनाम हो गयि ॥ हालत खुदकि जिँदगिपे गरिबि बन गयि करिबि भि नजदिक आनेसे बदनाम हो गयि ॥ शेभ नहिकि कुछ महिनोसे बीन लादेन बन गयि चेहरा खुदका शिसेमे आज बदनाम हो गयि ॥ अपने-आपको खुदने-खुदको एक धोका दे दिया "सिम्पल_लडका" बिना दिल जिकर आज बदनाम हो गया ॥ Someone, please correct grammars. Thanks. Loading...';ajaxpage('subscribeto.cfm?userid=938e401d-9654-41ba-9665-782af078204f','subspan4');">
Simple_KeTa · Jul 25, 2010 2:46 AM
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