nice one gal

ritthe · Aug 11, 2009 1:09 PM

WRITE YOUR POEM TOO I WANNA FEEL IT READ IT THE WORD THAT COME FROM YOUR HEART

metalgal · Aug 11, 2009 1:23 PM

ROAD in our hand there is a map leading ot tomorrow even it ..it take a little longer to get there we cant lose sight of our destination oh yes we were led astray by the wind that blowing..... the sun is rising to shine on out path again it we walk on without giving up and without hurry eventually a beautiful flower will bloom

metalgal · Aug 12, 2009 1:53 AM

Nice poem metal girl!! very touching. I wish I could write poems instead of plagiarising. Like this one: Roses are red, Violets are blue, Most poems rhyme, This one doesn't. :)

dekchidriver · Aug 12, 2009 12:56 PM

You will ever never conquer a mountain Will you stand on the summit a few moment so, then the wind will blows your  foot-prints away....   ABODE SHIVA..

natyavaruval · Aug 14, 2009 9:05 AM

N_val G, Nice one. I remember one song out of your poem. "Give me miles and miles of mountains and I'll still ask for the sea" -daum

daum · Aug 14, 2009 9:37 AM

life sick of it all,sick of my life watching moon pass me by i sit and wonder .am i here for any good if only.if only i could fly away from this place i would go if could watching the sun pass me by am i really living how i want ? if only ,if only i could fly away from my sin,my soul i would flaunt watching the stars pass me by do they really care at all? if only,if only i could fly away from the things that make me fall watching the world pass me by is anybody listening to me? if only,if only i could fly above and beyond .just to flee flying so fast not slow seeing what is high and what is below so gently with the wind i flow sick os it all sick of my life sick of the pain sick of strife

metalgal · Aug 14, 2009 10:39 PM

metalgal All you need the charming eyes the bold tone and strong hands lead you through fascinate all the way fun and frivolous a trustworthy company.. .. .. and you will see the colors feel the sun warm and see stars shine on you moon to smile and the thunders sparkle at your magic you will see the day open heart and wide smiles sun shining on you the warmth quenching your heart wait my dear, you will you will its for sure life comes lively again...

hereigo · Aug 15, 2009 4:25 AM

Lovers, forget your love, And list to the love of these, She a window flower, And he a winter breeze. When the frosty window veil Was melted down at noon, And the caged yellow bird Hung over her in tune, He marked her through the pane, He could not help but mark, And only passed her by To come again at dark. He was a winter wind, Concerned with ice and snow, Dead weeds and unmated birds, And little of love could know. But he sighed upon the sill,  He gave the sash a shake, As witness all within Who lay that night awake. Perchance he half prevailed To win her for the flight From the firelit looking-glass And warm stove-window light. But the flower leaned aside And thought of naught to say, And morning found the breeze A hundred miles away.

metalgal · Aug 19, 2009 2:35 AM

“Love never dies a natural death. It dies because we don't know how to replenish its source.

metalgal · Aug 19, 2009 2:37 AM

life sick of it all,sick of my life       watching moon pass me by               i sit and wonder .am i here for any good  if only.if only i could fly        away from this place i would go if could             watching the sun pass me by  am i really living how i want ?        if only ,if only i could fly  away from my sin,my soul i would flaunt          watching the stars pass me by  do they really care at all?             if only,if only i could fly  away from the things that make me fall        watching the world pass me by                    is anybody listening to me?  if only,if only i could fly                above and beyond .just to flee  flying so fast not slow        seeing what is high and what is below               so gently with the wind i flow  sick os it all sick of my life           sick of the pain sick of strife 

metalgal · Aug 19, 2009 2:40 AM

    एक्लो, एक्लो म यो मध्यरात सन्नटामा एक्लो म म छु अनी मेरो एक्लोपना म छु अनी मेरो एकान्तता ति आकाश तारा हेर्दा सुन्दर छन' तर ति सबै एक्लै एक्लै, आफ्नो अन्त्यको प्रतिक्षामा छन  आखिर सब चिज क्ष्अय छन सिवाय यो मेरो एक्लोपना, छैनन साथी म भन्दिन बस्दीन समाजमा म भन्दिन छैनन प्रेमिकाहरु म भन्दिन, तर पनि त्यो भिडमा म एक्लो छु सिर्फ म एक्लो छु मेरो छाया, मेरै बैरी भएको बेला मेरो सपना आकाश सरी भएको छ क्षितिज पारी गएर यो एक्लोपना बिसाउन खोजेता पनि यो मलाई अझै रित्तो बनाउदै मेरो मुटु अनी कलेजो, भुट्दै मिठो मानेर यो एकान्तता मेरो बिजोग चाखिरहेछ          नेपाली परियो, नेपालीमै कबिता कोरियो केही व्याकरणमा गल्ती भय माफि चाहन्छु

thopa · Aug 19, 2009 3:22 AM

सिमाना आवश्यकता, अभाव अनी अराजकताले सिचिंएको मेरो देश राजनेताहरुका पाँउमुनी गुट्मुटेर थिचिएको मेरो देश चार वर्ण छत्तिस जातको हुलमा मिचिएको मेरो देश छिमेकी मुलुकको कलमले सिमाना खिचिंएको मेरो देश ------------------------------- न रुखले दियो सुख न त सुर्यले न्यानो ताप हलोले नि जोत्न सकेन सतिले त देको रे श्राप हसियाँले नि रेट्नु रेट्यो पुनर्जन्मको थियो कि पाप ------------------------------ हिमाल पग्लिएर पहाड पहाड भाँसिएर तराई तराई पछी खै कता हराई यसरी हराउँदै खुम्चिएको मेरो देश ।।   -daum

daum · Aug 19, 2009 8:44 AM

An impasto: Tibetan proverbs... ________________   One remains unsatisfied after eating a mountain   Unquenched after `drinking an ocean`   Harka Gurung.... _________________ the Himalaya pervades the ; song music legend thinking & indeed the whole life of the Nepalese...   my self ________ ......... down to earth dirty muds sludes merge...evolved.... bloomed Lotus Padme Symbolic of wealth, prosperity... Mother GODDESS SHREE MAHA LAKSME Om Mani Padme Hum ......                  

natyavaruval · Aug 19, 2009 9:09 AM

Sap poem ramro cha. Keep it up.

no_quiero · Aug 19, 2009 10:07 AM

            Everything in this world All that I'll ever need Is in your eyes Shining at me When you smile I can feel All my passion unfolding Your hand brushes mine And a thousand sensations Seduce me 'cause I I do cherish you For the rest of my life You don't have to think twice I will love you still From the depths of my soul It's beyond my control I've waited so long to say this to you If you're asking do I love you this much I do In my world, before you i lived outside my emotions Didn't know where I was going 'Til that day I found you How you opened my life To a new paradise In a world torn by change Still with all of my heart 'Til my dying day

metalgal · Aug 19, 2009 9:22 PM