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perfectionist · Jul 27, 2009 10:39 AM

@Perfectionist Thank you for the interest. I was so impatient to get the first piece out that it became short. I will strive to increase the length in the next part. 

santosh1984 · Jul 27, 2009 10:52 PM

nice start ! when r u screeening the next episode ? :D

PIGGY · Jul 28, 2009 1:24 AM

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santosh1984 · Jul 29, 2009 2:42 AM

hahahaha.. nice unfolding of characters. luved the way u described Yojana, dats a sweet name, btw. took me back to my school days. plz do not stop coz there are silent readers out there as well.. look at the views, waiting for more.

perfectionist · Jul 29, 2009 1:07 PM

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perfectionist · Jul 29, 2009 1:15 PM

@Perfectionist Thank you. With reference to the end of the story I haven't written it yet and haven't thought how it is going to end.

santosh1984 · Jul 29, 2009 3:33 PM

thats gr8 plz keep writing. yo ta readers ko euta normal bahanaa po ho ta.. to make sure stories dont have as expected ending . sorry if u got offended. peace

perfectionist · Jul 29, 2009 3:37 PM

@ Perfectionist I am not offended at all. I was just addressing your concern.

santosh1984 · Jul 29, 2009 7:01 PM

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santosh1984 · Aug 5, 2009 6:29 AM

wohhhoo.. wow!! marvelous.. superb! luved it man! when yonjana said I love u, i thought wow, dat wat easy but just to know later that was a dream. well written. was eagerly waiting for the story and it ended in style. loved it, really! thanks for the story.

perfectionist · Aug 5, 2009 8:46 AM

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grgDai · Aug 5, 2009 8:46 AM

Santosh Ji, In fact, I love literature and I am planning to graduate in Literature. It was a while ago, I saw the starting part of your story or novella: whatever you call it. After a long time, I saw a good potential in a Nepalese guy to write succh an influencial story on sajha.com. Definitely, you had a good start as well as good end but still some part of the story is hidden. What did Rohit did after Yojana passed away? How Jivan came to the story and when they fall in love? Since, you are the narratoe of the story, you lacked all those facts and investigation was incomplete. I am a great fan of yours from today. Let me know if you gonna write another too. And for obvious, I am watching you on facebook too. At first, I thought it was the story about yourself.....but since many characters kept on popping in and out, I was confused. Even on facebook..... I am so interested to read about your status....... some marlboro lights....and budlight.. Keep it up and better try write in nepali onwards. You really have a great potential of writing. One of my friends is the greatest fan of you. She always come to me to talk about you. What if she wants to be in a relationship with you? Naulo Paribesh "Bideshi syau bhanda swodesi naspati mitho hunchha," Jai Nepal.

nauloparibesh · Aug 5, 2009 12:04 PM

@grgDai and Perfectionist Thank you for the comments.@nauloparibesh Thank you for the crtics. I will definitely keep them in mind from next time. I wish you all the best for your career in Literature. I appreciate you following me on facebook. Regarding your friend you can tell her to email me. We will go from there. 

santosh1984 · Aug 7, 2009 3:32 PM

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