well written !!! thats the kind of thoughts i like to read , i used to enjoy those m.. lights  but not anymore but i still like those cold coffee too.

2:00am · May 20, 2009 2:32 AM

Enjoyed the writing, and you should do it often! :) P.S: Don't get lured by free wifi

Grace_S · May 29, 2009 10:55 AM

SUNSHINE! So what if the real that you feel ain’t real? Theme is surreal but life has a dream-like feel! Reality is just wool pulled over your eyes, Clever guise of hidden lies, a bull in full disguise! A full of surprise is the meaning of life, why do we die? Answer supplied, so die to see that all reality is just a lie! Sky is the limit? We have all seen further into the seems, It started to gleam, a serene scene fathered my dream!  Thoughts took a bleak face, is heaven a deep space? Asking for life everlasting? we are all in a heated chase! Cuz’ life is a cheat’s race, a sinner’s path is a winner’s race, Can’t backtrack to fix mistakes, time has erased the trace! Side to side back and forth, as i cross another obstacle course, Using my every force like an iron horse, show no remorse! If we are born to die, what what is our role in being alive, Does fate really control our lives? Sunrise sunset sunrise console my eyes!

angeleyes · Jun 1, 2009 1:41 PM

Grace babez, what do we not get lured by?:D

angeleyes · Jun 1, 2009 1:43 PM

"The coffee smell is acoustically  strong.." What does aroma out of a beverage cup have anything to do with sound? How does the metaphor fit here? Could you please enlighten me on that? "Rob just applied for his masters in Loyola Marymount University; secretly I wish he’d never get into the program,.." Relationship hassles are aplenty when there is no commitment from either or both sides. Better accept the truth and be ready for it right from the start but enjoy the trip all along. Also, it sounds like you haven't got enough of him yet. "The coffee has gone cold, and they are out of brown sugar~ atleast I think to myself~ menthol’s keeping me thinking, thanks to light marlboro lights as I read through~ Smoking is injurious to health." Smoking is definitely not glam plus it tarnishes the oral pearls that you desperately need to reveal in smiles while charming a romantic or professional prospect. Nevertheless, a good piece. See! you have some fans already. Last edited: 01-Jun-09 02:41 PM

mR. hydE · Jun 1, 2009 2:40 PM

mR. hydE, no-one did ever mention how the term acoustic blends w/ the coffee smell. Im glad you noticed it. IT is not just any beverage cup and the term acoustic defies it all~ i love peets coffee so much that it's pleasant to all of my senses, LOL. Rob is a friend~ I'm sorry if my choice of words have made you an impression of what you just wrote.:D~ yeap these deceiving words I tell ya~ You know, I bought this new menthol marlboro lights and I just realized they even have it written the warning in the tearing plastic, they are warning us in every possible ways. So much to the carcinogenic effect, I better be knowing the all those pharmacology beforehand. haha, and no  I dont smoke for any charming or professional prospect! Thanks for reading.:)

angeleyes · Jun 1, 2009 3:12 PM

Hey Angeleyes..                     How you doing chic? I haven't been reading sajha kurakani in a while.. so I totally missed this, until right now.  Very well written, I love it.. even though i am still loyal to Starbucks.. :) Peet's coffee is a little too strong for a softie like me.. BTW small, medium, large is used everywhere.. nothing interesting or special about that.. whereas tall, grande and venti brings in the conversation even if you are just arguing about it.. something to think about eh? (Starbucks should pay me for this) xoxo, jashmine!!

jashmine · Jun 1, 2009 7:45 PM

Jash, Im really sorry if my arrogance for peets demeans your pride for starbucks, I somehow relished the trendy sizes, :d and dont ask me how it made me write the whole arguement about it, the soul lies in the caffeine i guess wherever or however it comes to us, starbucks is the first love; and comes peets:P i aint getting paid anyways- can i just have a drip, whatever size! :D xoxo babe.

angeleyes · Jun 2, 2009 12:42 AM