Good try.

$88888888$ · Jan 25, 2009 8:13 PM

liked the lyrics,   need to recompose the music again n its going to be a hit.

pacific salmon · Jan 25, 2009 8:24 PM

hats off to the effort u put to make the song and video........it would be more better if u reorganise yo lyrics..there are still works to be done.......for me,it sounds like it will more fit in hip-hop category but ya gotta make the chorus lil bit catchy .......................just my personal thoughts!! Last edited: 25-Jan-09 08:30 PM

elusivecat · Jan 25, 2009 8:29 PM

chiiillll .. this aint mine.. and i have not.. 00% percent work on it.. it all mah fren.. off course he will be lookin at this post.. and .. laughin.. i mean.. hatsoff.. salute.. its just incredible.. just wut he does... errtime.. hez just a idk.. how to say.. legend... and i can't wait to see how he gonna .. come up wid his album and all.. good work.... he carries.. music wid him.. haha these are some of his.. previous.. creation.. delilah song

lil_SilenZe · Jan 25, 2009 8:42 PM

mo mo song

lil_SilenZe · Jan 25, 2009 8:44 PM

songs are funny

lil_silenze · Jan 26, 2009 12:01 PM

LOLZ!!!! That's freakin awesome dude!! AM RI CA ko dain!!! HAHAHa

yumraj · Jan 26, 2009 12:15 PM

Thank u all for liking this song. Just 4 da record the musical composition was by Mr. Jason Mraz who is a terrific singer. Here is the original song Lil bro i'll catchya later Last edited: 26-Jan-09 02:20 PM

gwanch · Jan 26, 2009 2:09 PM

gwach bro lai nasodhi.. i posted da song.. i hope u wont mind.. u r da owner.. buh still .. lolz thought of.. sharin.. sajha ma... name pani gwachey production rakhdeko.. how is college??

lil_silenZe · Jan 26, 2009 4:33 PM