"I am among the people who don’t get emotional often. But the moment made me realize that I am among one of the emotional bastards." Hehe. Aren't we all?! Great read! Loved your story! Some women know when you're lying and yet, if they like you, they will continue to play your game. Those are the keepers. Please do write more.

dekchidriver · Mar 1, 2009 7:26 PM

Great Read

mamfuli · Mar 1, 2009 9:07 PM

Thanks, 'fucheketo', i will never stop writing, i am thinking to write on a plot as soon as i get free time.  Hey 'dekchidriver', i myself loved the line too, and the  women thing you wrote is cent percent correct. 'mamfuli ', a lovely name, thanks yar.

eclectic · Mar 2, 2009 1:36 AM

Nice one. Keep writing!!!

theEverest · Jan 19, 2010 2:05 PM

Thanks theEverest, I'll surely do keep writing.

eclectic · Feb 11, 2010 7:23 AM

Lop it.

meera · Feb 11, 2010 10:28 AM

Meera, thank you for loping it.

eclectic · Feb 13, 2010 11:21 AM

Awsome !!! 8848m likes this.

8848m · Feb 13, 2010 4:12 PM

Eclectic,good one. Keep it up.. the last line reminded me something.... I told my mom,"We can make panipuris at home and that taste better than the ones we buy..". Mom said,"Really?", I added, "Ya, I've tried." Mom: "when?" Me: "about 15 years ago".. Mom: You are only 8 this year.. Keep it up.. Guchcha chor.

guchcha chor · Feb 14, 2010 12:22 AM

nice. keep on writing!!!!

pirka · Feb 14, 2010 2:21 AM

Thank you 8848m and Pirka.Thank you guchcha chor. Yes, the childhood memories are always fun to remember. 

eclectic · Feb 16, 2010 10:30 AM