Ratobhaley, You write extremely well. Keep writing, brother.

BABAL Khate · Jan 19, 2011 3:35 PM

writing is smooth (but I feel, you could have extend little bit at last part which leads Navin to point a gun towards you) I must appreciate your writing (you mention this is your 1st time), it has unique plot Hope to read more in future...All the best

Hasaune Paree · Jan 19, 2011 6:47 PM

 Thanks and sorry for late reply. Don't have a lot of time as I used to have. Ke garne.

ratobhaley · Jan 27, 2011 11:51 AM

Wanted to bump up this post as someone is looking for movie ideas for Nepali movie. Kinda surprised my account still works after all these years!! Last edited: 29-Jul-20 02:04 PM

ratobhaley · Jul 29, 2020 2:03 PM

There is One. Welcome back.

LOGAN · Jul 29, 2020 2:13 PM

From the story, i can only deduce Navin as a normal guy, as normal as you, Ratobhaley. You have not really painted any picture of any psychological disturbance with Navin. You did talk about how your dad is an epitome of morality in Nepal and how your parents did an amazing job raising you as a single child. But nowhere i see Navin being treated badly or had any other psychological trauma. Being a child with 4 siblings is not enough evidence to turn him into a psychopathic killer. Yes stealing is definitely wrong but if that was enough reason for someone to resort to senseless violence, then believe me, we would have a lot more problems. Well, you can just say that you woke up from your dream sweating and Navin was sleeping peacefully in the next room, then all of this was a figment of your imagination. Then you will have a problem of thinking of Navin as a killer than Navin himself who has no idea what goes inside your head :-)

chicagoan · Jul 29, 2020 4:50 PM