Song melody is nice. I think your voice needs some practice, just an honest feedback. "Singers and Musicians are some of the most driven, courageous people on the face of the earth." Really? Can you give me an example of a profession which is not as (or more) driven and courageous than singers and musicians? Also, ask a sales person or somebody looking for a job for a while, they have faced rejections more than your singer/musicians. खोक्न त भएन नि ब्रो.

Kiddo · Jun 16, 2014 3:10 PM

मेलोडी राम्रो छ तर ठाउँ ठाउमा music को tune संग नमिले पनि जबर्जस्ति सब्द हरु बाचन गरे जस्तो लाग्यो | इन those places you could have found more appropriate words which could गो in -tune विथ द tune (लय ?) | येही मेलोडी मा सब्द अल्लि काट छाट गर्यो भने अनि अल्लि नाम चलेको मान्छेले गायो भने यो गीत लाइ मान्छेले मन पराउछन् | good luck | you said you used 'logic express' to create the tune . Does that mean you can make the music in computer without having some real people to play the instruments for you ??

nepalilaure · Jun 16, 2014 7:33 PM

you can you use logic express and downloaded loop to create any melody you want. its very simple especially if you have some sense of music. i

kumale · Jun 16, 2014 10:04 PM

@Kumale Are you sure that this is your original composition? If I am not mistaken, this song was sung by Bhim Tuladhar long long time ago.

rahashya · Jun 16, 2014 10:39 PM

I never said it is an original composition. I recomposed this one. you are absolutely right this one is by Bhim Tuladhar. Thanks for the comment. I made some changes on description to give credit to Bhim Tuladhar. Last edited: 17-Jun-14 12:06 AM

kumale · Jun 17, 2014 12:03 AM

Used to love Bhim Tuladhar / The Influence. Can't get hold of their old songs so love to hear any rendition. Keep it up. Liked the new music you have created. This was the original song - audio is not that great... Last edited: 17-Jun-14 07:13 AM

ne0 · Jun 17, 2014 7:08 AM

@Kumale...You didn't acknowledge that this song was originally sung by Bhim Tuladhar before I made a comment. You clearly mentioned that this your first attempt to compose the song. Anyway, I believe your intention was not to take credit on someone else composition . Glad that you edited your post and made it clear that the song was originally sung by Bhim Tuladhar. All the best for your future endeavor .

rahashya · Jun 17, 2014 8:42 AM

Rahashya. Matter of fact, The original song some one posted on the you tube is also uploaded by me. I had his old cassette tape and i made those mp 3. I know sound quality was not great but still old is gold. Last edited: 17-Jun-14 10:13 AM

kumale · Jun 17, 2014 10:13 AM

kumale tyo album ko aru geet ni post garum na bro youtube ma. I miss those songs.

ne0 · Jun 17, 2014 2:22 PM

Honestly dude,,,, you suck... I dont want to sugar coat like other guys here is doing. Sure you can do it for fun, as a hobby, bathroom, or when you are drunk. But, please please don't get your hopes high.

Duderino · Jun 17, 2014 3:27 PM

This is just a spare time stuff. I know myself very well....

kumale · Jun 18, 2014 6:56 AM