MaGorkhe risayo tetikai.

Hera bro, timro anecdotes haru ramailo hunchha, Tara chheu na tuppo ko hunchha. If a paragraph starts from one subject, continue the subject and only introduce a new subject if the contexts are relevant. You display classic case of ADHD in your writing. Perhaps you want to focus on getting focused on your writing than fighting with the keyboard warriors here.

Would love to read your post and hope I can understand it next time.
Everybody else, Why do you have to be so mean to this dude?