You are no more than bad Hindi serial bro, now you are loosing interest. I loved your story's first part, 10/10, second is 8/10 , third 6/10 . Your first part was two years ago and still you have not finished your story.You put few lines in months and ask us to raise our hand. well I raise my hand, now get your writing going on otherwise your story will be getting negative marks.The last part has lost my interest , still I will give you one more chance. Then I will see if you are worthy for my 5 minute reading and 10 min commenting ;-)