Nevada Jee,
Your tour advice is outstanding. However, I have a few lines for you. You are giving those precious tour guide to a Nepali person who grew up and had knowledge of every bit of Nepal.
Your tour guide is excellent for only tourists, I mean non-Nepalese (unnaturalized in US).
Especially, your paragraph 5 and 6 are indigestable for Nepalese. I visited Nepal last year after 14 years.
This is my take.

Thanks