Efg,
Thank you so much for your constructive criticism....I am still learning to write so I know I am not even 4 out of 10 yet.
Like I have already mentioned there are ways to deliver things to people..... I am a very peace loving person and I believe in live and let live.... but if a cat tries to cross my path.... I make sure that it is its last time ..... If you know what I mean *grins*