Posted by: efg June 5, 2014
Cheating Housewives
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I think you are very talented in skillfully putting your thoughts in the words. It's always a delight to read your threads. I think that you really have a potential of becoming a very good writer in future. But, as some have pointed out, I too have noticed numerous grammatical errors in this one as well as in your previous articles. These errors made me feel like "mitho khana khada khadai bich ma dhunga chapaye jastai". But I was too lazy to comment on these earlier. You need to work on your English writing skill a bit especially on your grammar and vocabulary. Please don't take me negatively but instead, I request you to take this as my constructive criticism. I hope that you are able to take positive as well as not so positive feedback. But, as I already mentioned, I find your stories delightful to read.
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