Ambrosia, 

   Of course, there is no "depressed woman", but the TONE of your writing reflects that you show no compassion towards them.  Your story on Aunti-ji shows the similar TONE, too.

    And there are many incomplete sentences with missing words in your writing.  When you write, write it to readers. You really need to EXPRESS your thoughts clearly when you put in writings. Thats why they have a saying, "Write to Express, not to Impress. "
  
    I am NOT here to discourage you from writing. Honestly,  I, myself can't write correctly when it comes to writing.

     PLEASE always remember to appreciate your readers, they are the one spending their valuable time to read your story.

I am expecting jaw dropping stories from you in near future.  Until then, Sayonara.