Considering you are a fellow Nepali and you are one of the most persistent "artist" I have ever seen, I really want to support you. But you gotta take people's feedback and also try to learn the genre. It seems you just want to drop a new song every other week without any meaningful lyrics, rhymes or hooks. Why don't you seek some advice from somebody who is in the business, somebody who can sing and somebody who can write?
Good luck bro, hope you get better at this; for now don't quit your day job just yet.