Confused_soul- I don't think you should be serious about what people talk. I laughed my ass off when I read your story and looking forward to the second part. I have no freaking idea how these people came here and called your story racist and crap and what not. This story is not different that popular hindi movie 'Dil' and I bet my last dollar most Nepalese enjoyed that movie. 

 I can understand why a literary purist won't like your parody. But the problem is, nobody came here and gave an objective criticism. And seriously what are they expecting. It takes some effort and planning to come up with any story, be it consistently bad or consistently good.

Long story short, it is not your fault that people voted for you and I don't think you should reject what ever is for the offer. You won it fair and you won it square.

-Mav
PS: I didn't vote for you.