Posted by: jay-z April 24, 2012
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I just have one word for your words: Mesmerizing
To me, you have finally outdone Empire State of Teej.
Something that caught my eye:
"There was a time she was a devout worshipper of Ganeshji and walked all the way to Kamaladi Ganesh from Bishalnagar even during bandh, where no vehicles were allowed to operate."
Did she always used to walk there or only during bandh?
I think 'when' should replace 'where'.
Sorry for being a grammar Nazi but I'm no match for the Allied Forces of your writing.
To me, you have finally outdone Empire State of Teej.
Something that caught my eye:
"There was a time she was a devout worshipper of Ganeshji and walked all the way to Kamaladi Ganesh from Bishalnagar even during bandh, where no vehicles were allowed to operate."
Did she always used to walk there or only during bandh?
I think 'when' should replace 'where'.
Sorry for being a grammar Nazi but I'm no match for the Allied Forces of your writing.