Hey Intelligent,

Only disappointment is I think gt is smaller than me in age how old r u gt .

This is your thinking which may not be true. I think you and me are almost same age which also may not be true. But it doesn't matter. It's not like juniors can't give any suggestion to seniors. I take suggestions from my juniors also and don't hesitate to suggest seniors.

dai harulai bro bhanna alikati Siva didaina ni.

I think you are trying to write 'Daiharulai bro bhanna alikati shova didaina ni.' It's shova not siva hai... but again this sentence doesn't make any sense... dai harulai bro bhanna shova didaina?? what does that mean? dai/bhai = brother (bro)

my intention is good I am good guy.

Yeah, I already admitted this and I won't be suggesting anyone whom I consider bad. 


By arulai kehein bhannu bhanda aghadey afulai herdata u even don't have any idol to follow in fb

Is this 'Bhai arulai kehi bhannu bhanda agadi afulai hera ta, u even don't have any idol to follow in fb' what you are trying to write?. Yes you can abbreviate word, but please think does it make sense before you use? And this last sentence of yours doesn't make any sense to me. First, I don't have facebook account. Second, even If I had why would it be big issue for not having any idol to follow? And last, even I don't have facebook account I follow several idols from Laxmiprasad Devkota to Maxim Gorky.

Bro, I am not trying to be judgemental here. But as I see some critical flaws in your writing, I am trying to give you true opinions based on personal experiences. I hope you will take this as constructive comments and try to improve your style and be thankful to this wonderful platform of Sajha which is providing us opportunity to learn and grow ourselves. 

cheers,
GT