Its gonna be hard to say but i dare to tell the truth "You suck" as a rapper. Not trying to be mean or anything but just saying "Yeo" "This yo boi" "MoFo" aint gonna do anything. If you like the field of music, you just dont have to be a rapper. Make your beats, trying mixing out and bring new flavor in nepali music field. We will love and appreciate that but not this trashy and foul language sh*t. 
     I hope you will start doing what your actually good at not what you think your are good at.

            Peace brother from another mother!!!