I donno for some strange reason I cud not connect with the last part of the story, but before that I was simply luving the flow. May be it hasnt been that long that I have been away from home or may be I am too naive to understand the obvious.

I have always luved your narration, they are too good.. I kinda visualize each and every scene with every word u jot in, this wasnt different. Loved your narration again and waiting for more.