A Fantastic read I must say, and alike all good articles in sajha, I am a little dissappointed that this was almost going to get unnoticed. I am simply amazed how well you've controlled your writing and the choice of words is immaculate. To be honest, I did not quite like the first paragraph, assuming all you'd write would be the niceties and redudant details that readers no longer wish to read. But I was in complete awe as the story unfolded, the suspense added more to it.

Kudos.