Stiffler,

I was eagerly waiting for your comment. Yes, the closure was not strong enough. Wish I had spent a little more time narrating the last paragraph. Thank you for reading.

Jethobatho,

Not only in India, but at most places in South Asia where luxury is a far cry when it comes to majority of  public transportation, there is similar challenge. I still remember my trip from Birtamod to Pashupatinagar several years ago, it was more brutal. Appreciate you for your kind words.

Hareeb,

I had once spoken to a creativer writing major in one of the better schools here in US. She mentioned it takes her days and even weeks to write the closing paragraph. And considering I wasn't anywhere closer to being a writer like her, I guess I just need to live with what I have written. But yes, I shall try to spend more time on the closures than I have done before. Thanks for reading, it means a lot for a novice writer like me.

Footyfan,

Appreciate you reading my gibberish. I was an engineering major, but I did not graduate from RIT Jamshedpur if that is what you were asking.

Suvash from facebook,

Thank you. But I am not well travelled, or else I would have made up a journal.