Posted by: behoove_me September 20, 2011
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You are very welcome perfectionist, but after I post my stories here, I always feel I could have done much better.  Also, I have issues with the flow and closure. Wish I could make it more succinct, and more dramatic towards the end.

Grace, thank you. It is sunny where I currently live. Makes me wonder where you are.
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